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Sunset’s Guardian Angel Sunset Shimmer wasn't the first Equestrian to make it to the human world. She was the second. by Jakub the Reshiram 22,379 words · 53 · 48

TCanterlot's Savior
MLP: FiM
Equestria Girls
Dark Souls
Romance
Adventure
Sad
Evil brown yaks have arrived through the portal. Twilight Sparkle calls on her relative, John Wayne Cousins, to wipe them out. After that, they learn the yak invasion was just the beginning, and there is a greater plot afoot.
Violence
Crossover
Human
Alt. Universe
Twilight
OC
Sunset Shimmer
Yaks
Subsistence · 14k words · 11 44 · 1.2k views

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202 weeks
Cancelling

Hi everyone, I’m back just to say that I’m cancelling my story, because really, no one seems to like it and instead, they seem to like stories that are more badly written? I had better reception before editing my stories, and I’ve seen how worse off stories have thousands of likes while good ones have almost no views or likes. I find that weird and unfair and I’m not sure I know why but I feel this has to be raised to attention and for us to ask ourselves why. Is it just because the authors of
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0 comments · 278 views
215 weeks
What for

Come, someone please tell me if there is any reason to go on. I see none. What is the point of being here?
3 comments · 309 views
215 weeks
Question about my Plot

I would like to ask frankly, this question that has been in my mind since my latest chapter. People keep saying that my story has no plot and therefore, it is bad and it's one of the worst stories on here, while I see worse stories being called, 'the best story ever'. How is that possible.
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1 comments · 251 views
217 weeks
Cover Picture 2

I think a good cover picture can attract readers. Mine... needs work. So I will try again with asking. Is there anyone out there that could make me a better cover picture than the abomination I've drawn? If anyone could help me out, I would be so grateful.
12 comments · 233 views
217 weeks
Editing

Hi everyone. I have gotten some feedback that my grammar for the first few chapters is atrocious, and yes, I know it is. I'm in the process of editing it and if the grammar was the only reason to stop you from reading my story, then I implore you to give it another try. Thank you and good day.
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Jul

15th

2020

Cancelling · 8:20am Jul 15th, 2020

Hi everyone, I’m back just to say that I’m cancelling my story, because really, no one seems to like it and instead, they seem to like stories that are more badly written? I had better reception before editing my stories, and I’ve seen how worse off stories have thousands of likes while good ones have almost no views or likes. I find that weird and unfair and I’m not sure I know why but I feel this has to be raised to attention and for us to ask ourselves why. Is it just because the authors of

Report Subsistence · 278 views · #Game over

Me

Hi I am Subsistence and I am not sure why I'm here anymore. I was inspired to write by Jakub the Reshiram, who has tried to leave many times, but he is staying again as someone else. He says his story is not the best, but I think the story line is quite good, even if it is not the best and if I cannot see what the plot is. I hope to one day write my story as good as he writes at least.
If you have any questions you can ask me and I will answer.

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Sunset’s Guardian Angel Sunset Shimmer wasn't the first Equestrian to make it to the human world. She was the second. by Jakub the Reshiram 22,379 words · 53 · 48

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Penanka72

Penanka72 #73 · 2 hours ago · · ·

Hey! I would appreciate it if I could get some professional feedback on my masterpiece!

TAll Day, Everyday.

Follow the journey of a little girl who takes her football to the next level!

Penanka72 · 127k words · 90 13 · 778 views

Just randomly self-promoting my work to get the story out there. Feel free to look at my other stories such as You’ll Never Walk Alone and A Sweet Tooth if you prefer something darker.

Thank you for reading friend!