Yay, Chapter 4! · 5:26am Oct 12th, 2022
Finally, Chapter 4 is here! This one took some time to get out, but it was nowhere near as brutal as Chapter 3 was with the edits. To give y'all some insight into what's going on with me, I'm currently deployed overseas, which makes writing a little tricky since I work 12-hour days. Any free time I get, I put into this story, so don't worry about me not completing it since I have the majority of it already outlined. However, I will not be able to post new chapters at the frequency of other authors since I'm still learning how to write, plus my editor demands the best, so theirs that, lol.
Also, if y'all have read chapter 3 and felt that the song section was lacking, I wholeheartedly agree. I was able to update that and give it the time and love that it deserved because I figured out what I was missing. I wanted to give a massive shout-out to PaulAsaran's A Gentle Night: Audience of One. The story clarified what I was doing wrong and the inspiration for how I needed to convey Octavia's emotional aspect to the song, so I wanted to say thank you! If you haven't read this, I highly recommend it.
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/213853/the-gentle-nights-audience-of-one
I also had a question for y'all. I was wondering if y'all would prefer each chapter to have a title or leave it how it is? Any feedback is welcomed.