Just for fun, Spike and Twilight try to write a Power Ponies fanfiction. Simple and easy fun, right?
Nope.
There are a few things about the fanfiction world Twilight needs to learn if she wants ponies to like her story.
Now with a French translation!
I'm crying from how hard I was laughing at the end. Dude...dude...all of my yes.
4401351 i'm gonna get hung on a stake in the TwiDash groups when this gets posted
Shhh... do you hear that? It's the sound of butthurt TwiDash fans... crying out in petty whines... It is a beautiful sound
4401360 oh man, it's gonna get so hectic up in hea
4401368 ahh yes, the sound of an angry mob approaches. I revel in it
oh I fear the wrath you have called down upon yourself good sir, I shall pray in the light of the seven for your safety. But also this was hilarious.
4401960 i appreciate the support my friend May the grace of whatever deity you believe in rescue my soul from judgement tonight
My sides!
I demand to see twilight's OC. Until then, 9/10
And a like
And a favorite
And your babies
4402000 my first attempt at comedy... succeeds!
*imitating the Heavy* BWAHAHAHA!
Wonderful story, 5 stars A+ 4 stars You can get away with this, it's totally not twidash, thats believable right ... right
*Reads story*
4401360
Indeed. Your username is somewhat fitting at this moment.
omg, dustin. so true... so true
Ummm . . . For once in my life I'm at a loss for words - I simply have nothing educated to say. So instead of saying something educated, I'm going to be refreshingly, honestly generic: I loved this piece! I loved the concept, I loved the execution, I appreciated the hidden jokes and the way you used satire to ridicule practically half the writers on this site . . . In short, I loved it and I will be looking forward to seeing more from you in the future.
4402064 thanks! i made sure to ridicule myself a bit too, because I kind of have a tendency to be annoying like Twi when it comes to generic stories.
Nobody likes Hum-Drum...
The satire in this... Man, I love it.
Extra points for irony for Spike delivering the lines on no one wanting to read a Hum-Drum story.
:rainbowderp that was deep... in a really funny way
This is where I hit the uprate button.
(Psst--it should be "she and Spike." And I still laughed!)
4402184 Thanks, sir. I wanted to give my two cents on the annoying fanfiction stereotypes in a fun way.
All. My. Yes.
It's so true.
4402194 M'am, but still applies!
4402224 sorry, ma'am. no disrespect intended.
4402230 None taken!
T-too much win!
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4402385 that gif was beyond epic
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Edit: Popular box get!
Excellent satire, my dear author. I smiled the whole way through. Normally i'd try and give a more detailed and in depth review, but I feel that would only defeat the purpose of this piece, so I shall refrain this time (that and it', like, 11:30pm and I'm too tired to do so).
You'll have my upvote when the counter doesn't read 42 anymore. Good luck in your future endeavors.
~ Lupo
Obligatory:
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Now that that's out of the way, someone write 'Fili-Second Eats a Baked Potato',
haha this story so reminds me of people on here with their editors haha. This really relates to people and i love it!
10 out of 10 for Comedy
9 out of 10 for grammar
10 out of 10 for overall story.
A l i k e a n d a f a v e y u o r w a y
Curse you! We humans need to breath!
Sad thing is, I've had a very similar conversation with my cousin (I being Twi) when I first discovered fanfiction.
Truer words were never written.
4402862 do not ask. Do.
Worth the wait of page loading.
Pretty sure you just subtly dissed 99.9% of the 'romance' writers on this site.
And the rest of them are laughing.
Fanficception!
(Yes I know the word doesn't work that way.)
Enjoy your practically obligatory fave and upvote.
You know. Since you covered the room in blood and organs from my sides splitting.
4404031 hope you have a mop handy and thanks man.I'm glad you liked it
I get the strangest feeling that this story is trying to tell me something. But what is it?
Oh yeah, that it requires a green thumb.
As for TwiDash, I ain't even mad.I love the cover art.
Fillysecond eating a potato reminds me of Batman eating a hotdog.
4404414 lol thanks i thought it fit fairly well
Yep, sounds like the average Feature Box fic.
What has been will be again,
what has been done will be done again;
there is nothing new under the sun.
This is the stuff TVtropes are made of.
4404437 And THAT reminded ME of THIS! Small world, huh?
4407608
Hahaha! Small world indeed.
For the record, I don't believe a word of that A/N at the bottom...
4402862
I'll consider it.
That sounds like an average feature box and for making laugh with its generic stupidity.