Pinkie Pie, Rainbow Dash and Apple Bloom discover that there is some truth to an old horror tale that was made up as part of a smear campaign against the introduction of Zap Apple products back in Granny Smith’s day.
Comic version:
http://lister-of-smeg.deviantart.com/gallery/48430080/Zap-O-Lantern
I like this. First comment.
Is something wrong here?
5301111 Not anymore. Just fixed it. Cheers, dude.
This is a really intriguing premise. But Crosspatch and Lazybug shouldn't get off so easy. They were going to destroy the Apple's free will.
Apple Bloom fits in a jar? Call me a skeptic but I don't think that works.
5301183 Cheers!
Took me a while to understand what that meant.
Crosspatch and Lazybug should have been sent to prison. They were making an attempt on somepony's life and they just get forgiven. Prolonged servitude to the Apple family at least. Is their no justice? If I were there I'd at least tie them to a chair and threaten them. This. Was. An. Attack!
They should be. They should be incarcerated criminals.
5301493 I'll be sure to give you a call if I need a proof reader. Cheers.
5301523 Aye. As was Trixie's takeover of Ponyville. As was Sunset Shimmer's demolition of Canterlot High. As was Discord turning Equestria upside down.
The forgiveness ratio in the show to those who ask for/earn it is about 50/50, and Crosspatch and Lazybug managed to crawl to the good side.
5301590 The thing is, they all acknowledged that they where basically terrorists. And Discord was turned to stone again. And all of them should still got off easy.
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5331377 I'll mull it over.