Big Mac hates rocks. A lot. He never used to, and he's not entirely sure why he does now. Besides, what did rocks ever do to him?
A MarbleMac prompt, courtesy of Rated Ponystar
Edited and reviewed by Reneigh Haycart and Rated Ponystar
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Short but poignant. I like it.
Well done!
6653190 Agreed.
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Thank you all! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Commence read.
Very melancholic.
Why, why did you do this to me, you heart-wrencher?
Take it, just take my green thumbs-up and leave me be to ponder life as I lay in bed.
6654097 Sorry about all the dust in the room there. ;)
Seriously, thanks for the kind words! I appreciate it a lot, and I'm glad you enjoyed the story. :)
I'm... I'm just going to give my sister a hug now.
Dang, that was a little harsh. I have to say, I was expecting rocks were the reason Big Mac lost other loved ones, via a rockside while two ponies were taking apples to the market.
Hm.
I liked it.
Interesting.
Beautiful and heartbreaking!
I will admit that I'm puzzled as to how rocks could actually make anyone sick. But in this story it fits perfectly.