Soarin and Rainbow Dash are always bickering. Always. In fact, if Twilight didn't know better, she'd think that they didn't like each other.
Of course, that's not the case at all.
Takes place after Friendship Games
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Oh, this was cute~
Not a bad effort for a first story.
No reason to be embarrassed. It's a good observation about RD's character and the story works well. A cute, well written, small set piece. You get an up vote.
(The story was fourth in the Popular box and #14 overall when I found it.)
7358305 Heh, thanks. I had some fun writing it.
7357653 Yup I love writing cute
7358324 Thanks for reading and commenting. I appreciate it.
Hehe, this was a nice read. Can totally see Dash doing this too!
This was really cute!
OMG I LOVE THIS!!
You characterized Dashie perfectly! So perf!
Fave!
Dude, if this is your first story then you have superb talent! Most fimfiction writers take a while to reach this level. I applaud you!!!
This was a super cute story! Keep up the good work!
Awe I love this
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then they run off to the broom closet ;)
Can you make a sequel about that.
it's just so adorable. You did a great story, even if it's your first story.
To be honest, when I first saw the tittle of the story, I thought that it was just another normal story, so I just skipped it. Then I had no short story to read, when I saw this story (the 3rd time) I said to myself "I think I'll give it a try" then it turned out to be one of the best story I had read.
Good Job! Fave it.
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And started to tickle each other
Haha this is waaay better then my first story