Pinkie got back from the Crystal Empire, and it was business as usual until she noticed strange things happening around her. Is she the target of a conspiracy... or is it just her imagination?
Pinkie vector from:
http://thefrostspark.deviantart.com/art/Thinking-Pinkie-Pie-Vector-539178256
Proofread by: Koekelbag
Well, I'm certainly interested in where this is going.
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Thanks, I'm glad somebody is interested
In reality, the story is complete, and I will post chapters daily, so you won't have to wait for long.
8143835 Cool.
They've either been replaced by Changelings again (at least ones still loyal to Chrysalis)...or it's something worse...
And it's a weird time when still-Evil Changelings is the BEST option.
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It might be changelings; it might be something else, or... it might be Pinkie's imagination :)
Blame Hasbro we need a good new villain! Chrissie is the last one left (and I love her in that role, but still...). Hopefully, they will bring somebody worthy in season 7 - if only they could hire Tom Hiddleston for the role, that would be something
I'm a Star Trek fan, so I know the general premise of this tale, but I'm interested to see where you're taking this.
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I can neither deny nor confirm that it was inspired by Star Trek or any other thing so... live long and prosper
Hmm...
Until now I'm with Pinkie Pie and say that they are -slighty better prepared and informed, but still not well enough by a long shot with so many lacking informations about the past's events- changelings. Or something else that can shapeshift with the help of magic or otherwise. But Changeling is until now the biggest call.
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Please let me know, if still thinks the same after reading chapter 3
Ohhhh...
so in Chapter 1, when was written at the top about the "mourning for the lost friend"... hm I have the feeling the "changeling Pinkie" will try to save the captured Ponies and die in progress. She literally knows everything like the real Pinkie -memories and the connected feelings for everyone- and feels now the same obligation for them as their "best friend".
Well, that's just my guess.
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Bah! Don't you think such comments should use some spoiler tags ?
Anyway, whatever happens - before the sad scene there will be some ass kicking and... hmmm shall we say some 'baking'. The next chapter will be released tomorrow - this one will be a bit lengthier (~ 4 500 words), so stay tuned
8149479 Oh, sorry. I change it.
But to be honest that connection was for me kind of... obvious...
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No problem, and I'm not saying you were wrong - I just prefer to mark my 'speculations' with spoiler tag, just to be on the safe side
Wow. Just wow.
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Was that a 'good' wow or 'what a POS' wow ?
8156174 I'd say it was both a Wow wow AND a Wow, that was an unusual ending. Neither of which was bad, though.
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If you enjoyed it, then I'm happy
Xerox----> traidor-------> cambiantes extintos----->
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Can't say that was my intention here, but OK
*claps* That got a tear out of me
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Thanks, I'm glad it moved someone
A very good story with a very sad ending.
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Thanks, although the story did a lot worse than I expected and to this day I'm not entirely sure why...
Featured in August for Pinkie Pie Stories
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Not sure if that story deserves it, but thank you, kindly
Its been awhile since I've seen such a good changeling story. That was really good.
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I'm glad you enjoyed it, even if it's not exactly a masterpiece