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A young human male dies after getting into a fight and goes to meet Death in the after life. Once there he is offered a second chance at life in a new world, and new form. And the new form he choses for his new life is the four tailed beast Son Goku. Now follow him as he makes his way through the world that he now calls home.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 33 )

You need to call this something else. People are gonna come here hoping for something about the Dragon Ball franchise.

I thought that might happen which is why I added the picture of Naruto's Son Goku; however I will change it to make sure that no further confsion happens.

Why is he freaking called son goku?! also, I'm not nit-picky, but try to spell correctly. JEEZ.

Hey is called Son Goku because the character he turned into is named that. Oh and about the spelling thing, yes I know it is bad and I plan on fixing it.

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Why not 'Tale Of The Four Tailed King Son Goku'?

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I said “people” are gonna come here for Dragon Ball. Not “Everybody.”

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No, the Naruto Character is called Son Goku as well, possibly a reference to Dragon Ball, which itself is based on "Journey to the West" where the main character is called Sun Wukong.

Anycase, since the title has 'Monkey King' on it, I knew it wasn't Dragon Ball immediately. This might prove interesting.

Displaced Bijuu? This will be really interesting.

and before anyone says anything yes I know that I made a lot of gramatical mistakes in the story and will fix them, when I have more time.

...Okay. I'm still gonna suggest that you get an editor.

This feels like a mom not wanting her child to defend herself even though he NEEDS to know how to.

I thought the Four Tailed Beast was a chicken.

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Sun Wukong is the chinese name, Son Goku is the Japanese name. It's nothing to do with Dragonball.

Quotes should be touching the beginning and ends of dialogue, not the framing of the narration around it. He said, "this is what it should look like. And it ends here," he finished. After a moment, he added," Not like this."

Also, no more than one speaker per paragraph.

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thank you for your help, I am still trying to get used this,

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There are no chicken tailed beasts. Cocoro from Legend of Zelda may be monsters that look like chickens and can murder you but they aren't as strong as the tailed beasts. Not by a long shot.

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The tailed beast the sage never mentioned.The Rabbit of Caernobogg.He's a vile little varmint.

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Fluttershy would not like if someone used the holy hand grenade to deal with it.

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It's worse when you realize that if Naruto ever had a rabbit summoning contract, that rabbit would be the genin level

Spell check: Its spelled Journeys. The ies rule doesn't apply here.

um hi are you going to add romance and sex to your story's? just asking

A REAL masterpiece! Liked and followed.

I WILL PAY YOU to fix that typo in chapter one's title, man.

any idea when we can expect an update and new chapter?

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can't give a time frame at the moment, sorry.

Why is he scared of a Timberwolf?! Tailed beasts are made of burning chakra while they have physical forms their chakra can burn anything they touch. For him it would be even easier he is the tailed beast of lava!

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