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good, good story. i approve soo much!
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I like it. Gonna track. Keep it up :)
Ara ara~
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Moist
Nice touch with the authors note
Dang it Pinkie!
good chapter man
Moist
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I'm seeing a recurring theme here...
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How so?
I think this is the first second-person POV story I've read that I've enjoyed. That style tends not to sit well with me. So far, it is the only gripe I have about this story. For that, I think you're doing a great job. Can't wait to read more.
Thanks, second person was never really my thing, but I gave it a try.
I can explain
Comedyyyyyhyyy.
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What makes you say that?
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I don't know how to make sing notes. But for the question, I find it funny.
She?
Great job on chapter four
Hehe, breaking the fourth wall like a boss since 2010
reverse, reverse, reverse; Moon-walking real funny man great job
This is it so far? Now it's time for the waiting game...
Kinda entertaining, I could see this becoming something I would interested in following, I just hope the chapters will be longer in the future, even if it might take a little longer.
This sounds interesting, but I've always ran away from the gore and death tags, how explicit with those tags will this fic be?
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The most that will happen is talking about the past, which could include a death. Not sure If I will continue the story a steady pace though...
Sapient. Not Sentient.
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So there is a difference!
Cool.
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All animals are sentient. Except maybe jellyfish and seasponges and the like with the most basic nervous systems.
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Coverart sauce: https://www.deviantart.com/ashley-arctic-fox/art/Tempest-Shadow-Halloween-2017-723023373 (SFW)
Gg
I like it, but the pacing should be slowed down a little. Take your time, explore thoughts, feelings, enviroments, conversations.
Dam good song good choice
Just need a space from gone completely
I meant explain who said they'll come back tomorrow like
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Sorry, when you give me the edits, I just kinda copy and paste the whole thing without looking.
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It's ok, no harm done.
Twilight, where was your patience?
Ooh, someone did research on horses' different gaits.
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Oooooh, you jerk. You did that on purpose!
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Aaaaaahhhh! You jerk!
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I will do that every chapter
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You'd better, you sadist!
I looked that up. That's an $1100 guitar. (Long and Mcquades in Canada) dude got expensive taste.
Ooh, I get to look forward to an author's note. The intrigue has been doubled.
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*plays harpsichord music* Why? Why can't you be merciful and use damp instead? Must you play with my rage in this way?
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Because it's funny
Good vocals, awesome solo guitar.
That poor drummer, though. Probably bored out of his mind. The rhythm isn't that imaginitive, and the chord selection is kinda boring. All in all, not a bad song, but not a great one, either. 6/10.
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Wow, the first person to notice that!
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I am unamused in an amused sort of way.