[Second person fiction between you and Luna]This story is a more realistic take on a pony X royal sister fiction in the sense of how it would actually happen. After a spell cast by Princess Celestia goes awry.....you, a simple brony, have been sent directly to Equestria. No, no instant cutie marks or instant shipping is in this fiction. Trust me, I know what I'm doing. However, if you don't like human in Equestria stories OR steamy scenes, then stay away from this fiction. Simple as that.
I look forward to seeing where this goes. Please, continue.
The concept is.interesting. Will read later.
nice take on th' HiE, i'll love to see where this goes.
This chapter... I like it! media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m8kpgfEvJx1ruojeh.gif
Tracking can't wait for more
Man... how he described luna... im speechless...
This right here. I have been looking for this for a VERY long time. Must have more. Moar. Now. Please
If thats alright with you
cdn.uproxx.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/08/anchorman-well-that-escalated-quickly.jpg
But seriously, this chapter did feel a tad rushed. Otherwise, I can't wait to see what you have in store for us.
1156262 ^THIS.
THE ULTIMATE PLOT DEVICE OF MLP FANFICTION
ohtheoriginality.jpg
1156339 i0.kym-cdn.com/entries/icons/original/000/006/088/trollestia.png
She does seem to mess up her magic quite often, doesn't she?
1156397
i.chzbgr.com/completestore/2012/2/9/11ed5b95-e553-4d9d-bb1a-0d5f1eca4bf7.jpg
Must have more... I love this so far...
1155948 What he/she said...
I'm not much of a shipper nor do I read human in equestria stories but I'm gonna read this anyway.
TAKE THAT!
*edit: read it, and not exactly my cup of tea. That was to be expected, so don't feel bad. This is pretty well written, so I'll give you a thumbs up and a pat on the back! People will certainly like this story.
Luna is best princess. That is all.*
soda machine doesnt work SEND IT TO THE MOON
family of ducks in your way SEND IT TO THE MOON
Jex, are you going to have us want this more than a cartain other story.
This is a good start, the scene is set for a few plausable scenarios, and the humour keeps anything that might be objectionable to some, under check.
No doubt I wont be the only one wanting more.
1156262 Even I noticed the rush. It seems to be a recurring error for me...
I hunger...
Well I faved it just to see how it will go within future updates. (don't need to mention the rush since you've noticed.) : )
I take it,as a something new so, good luck with it :]
1156823 Just try to lengthen out certain scenes more. If it's a brony who's just been jammed into the royal castle, I'm certain he's going to experience an overload of the senses which could be focused on. You could also draw out the portion where he's made into a pony; I'm certain that would be quite the transformation.
This... is GOOD!!!!
well done i say
1156397
t1.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcTD52YZl1xoekqC64PAtoK-kIBwc6vC6NGDD4Qm8jdCaGv4KC7Hzg
1158069 That image scares me wordans.us/wordansfiles/images/2012/4/3/135449/135449_340.jpg
1158107
dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Discord.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png
1158151 And there they are again; I can't seem to find out where all these icons are coming from, nor do I know how to create them. Are they just old ones that the site no longer lists as automatic for convenience? Or are they more like Easter eggs, only to be found by those who know where to look, as a symbol of the unsigned covenant between the creators of the site and its users? I'll never know.
1158169
It's a Greasemonkey script created by FiMFiction.net's very own iloveportalz0r.
1158193 Okay, I downloaded it, but I don't know how to view it
Two things for Jexx:
I would think that she'd be more likely to accept his decision simply because, as an honorable and benevolent ruler, she would want to keep her promise.
Wouldn't she leave the choice up to the POV character? Sure, you as the author may have decided to make him an Earth pony, but I would think it would make more narrative sense for her, being the honorable and benevolent ruler that she is, to give him the the freedom of choice and let him decide on his own to choose the subspecies of pony that you had planned for him to become.
Other than that, it's a good story. I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes.
1158283
Do you have the Greasemonkey plugin installed? If you do, you should be able to see the new icons in the "Add comment" section of most of the pages that allow comments, as well as the add/edit blog post page.
1158330 Alas, I use Google Chrome, and cannot install it outside of the Chrome Web Store, which appears to be lacking it.
1158385
Ah. I don't use Chrome, so I didn't pay attention to the part on the script install page that says Chrome users may have to install something called "Tampermonkey" first...
Lucky you. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/discord.png
1158424 It works, oh my Celestia it works! And the download only took a few seconds! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Sweetie_happy.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra2.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia2.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Bonbon_grin.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Vinyl_Scratch.png
1158467
Wait a tick...
I was actually able to successfully help someone troubleshoot a browser issue?
dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Colgate_beam.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Colgate_beam.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Colgate_beam.png
Clopping to 'humanized ponies'?
(Edit) You changed it... how could you...?
Thats hard considering this is probably a self-insert fic
the bane of all things sacred and harmonic in equestria- clop.
I will do all in my power to end this story
MORE! I DEMAND MORE!
Oh shit. When I read the part where I silently squeed, I did this:
*does high pitched squeal and faints to the floor with wide eyes and smile still on my face*
Love myself some Lunar Goddess! Ha! She thought I was dating Celly.
You, my friend, earn Three Photo Finishes:
Five Scootaloos:
And an Afternoon Delight.
This is BronyCup here, and I shall now go feed Rainbow Dash. Cheese pizza tonight, so yay!
Haven't read shall do tomorrow morning probably. I have Xbox things to do with brony friends. Look foward to reading though! Faved before hand to find easier. (Hope I don't have to remove later. Not a fan of human in equestria for the most part)
You have my attention for now. Beware, for it is flux incarnate.
I like this, can't wait to read more!
If he was clopping.....that must mean.....oh...my...
Please may I have another
cool nice worj
MMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAA *deep breath* AAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!! *gasp*
Where has this story been.
@Ebony Deep in the heart of ancient China.
"This Chapter I like it."
"I know right its-"
"ANOTHER!"
1155927
Well I'm looking forward to I Would Give To You.
th03.deviantart.net/fs71/150/f/2011/244/c/a/twilight_sparkle_awesome_smile_by_foxgear92-d48j0un.jpg
*begin sarcasm*
Oh, goodie. Another HiE fanfic! With someone screwing up a spell bringing a brony to Equestria and then they start to date!
*end sarcasm
As if that hasn't been done before.... Many, many times.