During a cool and calm snowy night in the last week of February, Sunset Shimmer meets a heartbroken 4 year old boy lost in the alley neighborhood. It’s up to her to find out what sisterhood means to her and find a way to help the poor little child. A child who was suffering from the loss of his parents and the unappreciated abusive behavior from his aunt who treated him harshly. An aunt who blamed him for the loss of her dear sister. Can Sunset and her friends give the boy the love, care, respect, and kindness he truly deserves and heal his broken heart?
This story also stars Principal Celestia, Vice-Principal Luna, Dean Cadance, the Shadowbolts, Fleur De Lis, The CMCs, The Dazzlings, and Chrysalis.
Chapters (31)
My heart melts with love
I'm surprised that this fic has no likes
The concept is good but the story seems a little rushed. Other than that it's great. Looking forward to read more.
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First off, great chapter, I've been loving this story, it's so cute. I was just wondering if you are planning to have any scene where Sunset writes to equestria to either Twilight or Celestia, about what is happening. And if at any time does Sunset's power of empathy let her see Chase 's memories. Either way can't wait for the next update.
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Nope, but they might have some time to use their powers, but I kinda chose to skip the pony ups. Because I just don’t Chase to think they’re freaky or anything, so they chose to keep the magic thing to themselves.
awesome keep it up
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I like the "big sister" persona Sunset is giving to Chase.
The writing style reminds me of APoeticHeart. But I also like where this is going.
Wait, is it possible to take care of a child while in high school?
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Thanks, but the beginning of this story explains why children shouldn’t be out in the snow all alone without a family.
I got a feeling that those aren't really the sirens the Rainbooms defeated during the Battle of the Bands. It's gotta be their human counterparts. I wonder if they will have the same reaction as Twilight when she met "herself."
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No these are the same sirens, but I made them regular human beings with their siren singing voices
Yaaaaaay
I really like how the "villains" are good people in this
May I ask why the story is in the updated section of the front page?
So, when will Chase get freaked out by Spike when he officially speaks to him?
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Nah, he’ll probably laugh
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Because I’m just making some edits and checking for corrections. I decided to make Chase 4 and let him turn 5 if I decide to do a chapter about his birthday.
This Story keeps getting Better & Awesomer.
This made me think of the hide & seek scene from Monsters Inc
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I know, but I wanted it to sound cuter
They should call the cops in the next chapter
I bet that those thugs and Estella won't last long in prison after they're arrested
Traps from the Home Alone movies and plots from 101 Dalmatians with Glenn Close. Good one. Also, I used some Home Alone traps in my story, Stay Together, No Matter What. If you want the whole story of the three kids, read these stories first.
Saving a Hopeless Soul
Dreams Don't Always Come as you Expected
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I’m sorry. I just wanted to do my own version.
101 Dalmations!!!
nice
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Dude, you can’t just laugh at someone for doing things their way.
Also, it is pronounced Dalmatians, not Dalmations.
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I wasn't laughing for that reason. I just thought that movie was kinda funny and thinking about it made me laugh
You do realize that Tirek did appear in Equestria Girls, but as a video game character, right?
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Yeah, but my friend just made a guess
I absolutely loved the toy story reference it was one of my favorite movies growing up so thank you for throwing in that little reference.
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You didn't have to apologize. You do your own story, I'll do mine.
i don't mind this story, but it needs editing.
spacing between each characters speeches (for a basic start)
Will Chase eventually find out that Sunset came from another dimension? And has Spike ever talked to Chase, freaking him out?
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No problem.
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Thank you! Thank you very much!
Before I submit, do you all want me to work on the sequel now or wait another month?
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You can work on it now if you want
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I also added a summer trip to Camp Everfree and Cadence and Shining Armor came as Chase’s babysitting group.
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What type of nightmare should Chase have at the beginning of the sequel that doesn’t involve Estella
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How about he has a freaky dream that is actually visions from the future. Visions like Spike talking to him, magic mutated human cats attacking, Sunset in her normal form and then eventually he sees one human cat creature, Catrina, wearing royal regalia. Then he wakes up from a dream, only to find out he's still dreaming, and then Catrina appears next to his bed, saying to him, "We're out of kitty litter."