UPDATE: Four chapters and the story is finally completed! Check out the end of this long description to see which chapters are left.
Arc IV - Chapter II - "Zero (Part 2)" (WIP)
Stone Chisel, one of the most notorious robbers of recent times, is finally caught in the Everfree Forest while trying to perform a spell to escape. Once he gets locked up in Tartarus, denying various offers that could give him an opportunity to start again, he finds out something that will not only change his life but also will make him commit the biggest mistake... setting free something... not so good.
This story happens during the Beginning of the End of Season 9, but in an alternate universe where something happened with the Great Galloping Gala and Crystal Faire (If you wanna know, keep reading!), and Flash Sentry is a unicorn.
Rated T because of violence, gore, death, and mild profanity. WARNING! SPOILERS IN THE COMMENTS!
More tags:
Princess Celestia
Princess Luna
Discord
Shining Armor
Princess Cadence
Starlight Glimmer
Flash Sentry
Flurry Heart
King Sombra
Grogar
CHAPTERS LEFT:
Arc IV - Chapter III - Zero (Part 2)
Arc IV - Chapter IV - Day of the Fallen
Arc IV - Chapter V - Privately
Arc IV - Chapter VI - Bye
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who dies
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I can't tell you so much right now , but the only thing I can tell you is that it would be tragic.
Interesting. Just as they get whistled away by Grogar.
I’m confused about so many things.
Honestly, despite the fact we don’t know the whole story, I can understand him getting mad. If someone told me that the reason I’m doing what I’m doing is because of my lack of understanding friendship I would be mad too. Also, I’m a little confused.
What?
I would have said, “nothing”.
Also, this was interesting.
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Yes, this prologue has so many things that are quite a mystery , but they will be explained. Don't worry.
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Confused about the story in general? The story is intentionally confusing, but if you want, tell me what's the matter.
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Did you like it?
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Yea, it was good.
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Thanks for the feedback, then. Means a lot.
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You mean “that”?
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Means a lot to me. Hehe.
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Your Welcome
its kinda hard to take a ancient evil that has killed others that calls people dorks and stupid. Maybe use more sophisticated terms like cretin, imbecile, ignorant, fool, etc.
however I am curious where this goes.
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Yes, you're right. That's why today I was looking for better adjectives and words to expand Tenebris' vocabulary. Thank you for saying that!
Man, if I was chisel I would have been snuck away. Also, this was a little confusing.
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Yeah, I'd have done the same thing.
Would you tell me why?
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There was a lot of things going on, and a lot of information in one chapter.
I wouldn’t be taking that insult.
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Oh, yeah. Typical.
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Because Imagine you just doing your job, and then this happens.
Ok, I'll give this a try later. At least the premise seems to be interesting.
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Sure! No problem. Thanks for reading.
Then, what kind of magic does discord have?
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Well, Tenebris is the first one able to handle a magical fusion between Discord and the Bewitching Bell of Grogar while Discord only has his own powers, but I'll edit that part because it's not so specific. Thanks for telling me!
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Your welcome
I actually laughed at this part.
Don’t worry flash, we all have those awkward moments.
Now he says that?
Even though I still would have been upset. Also, did he really have a melt down?
Also, is shiny picks and iron picks the same character?
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Good old Flash.
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Shiny Picks is the gem company where Iron Pick and Poofy Lantern work.
The company had it because they started losing their credibility due to Stone Chisel. If I was some colt living in Manehattan I would have recognized them as thieves instead of a normal company.
That’s surprising
I think it’s “Pegasus”.
You could just tell the leaders. Or creatures you trust to keep it a secret.
They can change color?
What does that mean?
I thought he already said what it meant.
Does that mean he murdered someone or he has to be murdered?
Huh, that turned dark.
Yeah, I actually looked up for the plural of pegasus, but Google said it was pegasuses. I used Google Translator because English is not my main language, though. I don't know if that page is something 100% reliable.
I invented it to be some kind of communication between them, like cops and radios in the real world.
Sorry. I tried to write he was just dissimulating, but now that I re-read it I truly didn't understand what I typed there. I'll edit it.
He asked for the meaning of that specific rune.
And it's only the beginning.
Nice built up even his allies are done with him also nice comparison to villainy and psychopathy.
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Thanks for saying that! I appreciate it.
Twilight is going to kill Tenebris, and if she doesn’t kill him she’s killing someone.
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Is that a scared twilight?
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I would say a shocked one, not frightened.
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Really?
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By now.
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I guess
Outside?
Magic?
Why is that important?
I thought that was discord that said that at first.
Wait, what just happened?
Outside the forest.
Eeyup. His own magic.
It will be later explained in further chapters.
Whoops! I completely missed that colour and didn't even find out while editing. Thanks for telling me.
Wings [❌]. This.
Cool WTH moment. WTH means What The Hell
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Yeah, quite shocking. Thanks for saying that!
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No problem, I am just expressing my feelings.
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I wasn’t able to see your message because it didn’t have the numbers.
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Oh... I thought I clicked on the reply button. Didn't even realize that. My mistake!