A drawing of a light salmon unicorn with a blond mane and red eyes next to a darker shade of Pegasus foal with light blue curly hair. The older pony had a chart with arrow pointing up upon a notebook. The younger pony didn’t have a cutie mark yet in this drawing as she smiled without a seeming care in the world.
Cosy sighs as she flattens the picture more with her hoof to see more crayon markings of curd word labeling the age, she drew the drawing at three years of age. She huffed as she began to let her mind wonder of a different life; before the cave and Tartarus, before Twilight’s school…
Before Cosy Glow.
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Reading what Cozy Glow had to endure in her taken-from childhood was emotionally torturing, nice backstory and insight to what happened after Tirek got imprisoned and how he came to knowing our loveable filly. Great story
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Wish I had read this sooner. Little formulaic perhaps and maybe a little dry at times, but that perfectly captures the voice of the Cozy Glow you are writing.
Any personal experiences go into this? The scene where Cozy is being hurt from being passed over by the other foals was particularly convincing.
I really like this story, I find it very interesting the way you explained how Cozy and Tirek began writing to each other. I never really thought about it, but it is kinda weird that a 10yo girl would start writing to one of Equestria's worst villains just like that, so I do appreciate the explanation. The story is great but it's really hard to read, you should rlly get an editor or check your grammar more, besides that gr8 story, loved it!