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Equestria is doomed. AU or not.
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Worry not, Spike is here!
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My point exactly 😑.
its just monkey business....
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Nice :)
I don't remember that one but it was catchy nonetheless.
Pretty interesting thus far, I shall be looking forward to where it goes from here.
Nice to see this in print. Enjoy everybody.
Well…just from reading the description, and watching some of SuperHorrorBro’s Dark Deception videos, I have a feeling this is gonna be a fun, if not crazy, read. So I’ll wait until 5-9 TOTAL chapters to be out, and then make a better informed decision on it it’ll go into my favs or not.
Until then, stay safe, have fun, and remember to smile.
…and yes I enjoy the more, mature stories if my name is anything to go by.
Curious on if this is based on some video game?
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I just checked a bit of the game and wow
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Indeed, Spike has a lot of work to do and it's high-risk work too.
Do not hesitate to ask any questions about DD if you have them.
I will gladly answer them to the best of my ability.
Well…nice reference to the Agatha fight from the newer updates. I can’t wait to see how Spike does against the Gold Watchers.
I'm guessing pinkie with the next stage being carnival theme with the clowns
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Correct
Question is, who's the surprise guest?
I don’t know why…but when I read this I hear the sound effect of Mario jumping.🤣
So reaper nurses are next…so what? That means it’s nurse Red Heart? Now I’m curious, especially as that part is more…adult(?) than the other sections. So I’m genuinely curious on how you’re going to handle them…and the JJ Gang…and I have a guess on who the “last” enemy, (based off of what the game has currently released), is going to either be Twilight, or Celestia…I personally hope Tia. But that is up to you.
With my rant now done and out of the way;
Stay safe, have fun, and remember to smile.
Okay, I’ll that end bit had me. But I have irl things to take care of so I’ll give a proper comment later.
Okay, now that I’m back, here comes my comment/rant.
The next is the JJ gang, and I originally thought the CMC would’ve been the JJ gang, but now I’m curious on who you’ll have as the three taking their place. And after the JJ gang I think you’ll have Celestia as “Momma” and her Trigger whatever you decide, either her, or Twilight as Momma.
And after these next two chapters, the author will need to make up most of the rest of the monsters, with all we know about the next monster, is a pointy needle manikin. So besides them, the author will need to make up monsters.
Now, as a more, mature, reader, I’d love to see a quick side story of how the Shadow is breaking whoever into his personal “queen”. Now, do I see the author writing that, no. Would I want to see it…so long as it was anthro or human…just my tastes so sue me.
But in the end, I can’t wait for more and will happily wait. Just do me these things… Stay safe, Have fun, and remember to smile everypony.
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Seems like you're a SuperHorrorBro fan?
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Don't underestimate Spike. It's his time to FINALLY shine. I mean, we can't let the Mane Six take all of the glory?
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Yes we can. It's called the Mane 6 for a reason. Not the Mane 7.
Luna, you don't have to be a prideful jerk, AND stop caring about your royal status, this is not the time!
And in Spike's defense, he is super stress out as it is, considering this crazy situation. PLUS, Spike isn't knowledgeable with the dream/nightmare world, or know about The Shadow beforehand, like you do. So, you literally walked into that one.
Ironic that his monster name almost sounds like Chef Pepper Jack from Skylanders ( Trap Team specifically ).
Interesting that you replaced the very first level/portal of the haunted hotel with the Murder Monkeys and Chef Monkeys from the game. With the corrupt monsters varieties of Applejack and Big Mac, and their disoriented farm house. Nice creativity, reminds me of leatherface.
Don't forget Sweetie and Scootaloo.
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Thanks
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Makes sense that the CMC will be Agatha, and Mrs. Cheerilee's preschool is the the Haunted School of the second level/portal.
That's new!?
Applejack, STOP pressuring him! Plus, WTF are you gonna do? You're still a ghost/spirit, stupid!
Shut up! You aren't helping!
Wait a minute?! You STOLE the Joy Joy Gang's boss form!!!!
Now what are you going to do, when you reach their own level eventually?
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I didn't it's just a large pony-like monster, with three heads.
Plus even if I did I asked Vince for permission to make a story based on his game and he said yes so long as I don't try to sell anything.
I hope you still enjoy it.
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As for Joy Kill's replacement in the story, you'll have to see, we're one episode away.
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That is just rape if you ask me.
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Wait?! You talked to the creator himself???
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Yep during one of his Q&A's
Told ya!
Question? Is he way worse and more powerful than Nightmare Moon and the Pony of Shadows/Stygain combined?
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His current level of powers are unknown but he's dangerous.
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Technically since they are bound to Spike as an anchor they can touch him
Now, he has finished the third level/portal for the Gold Watchers/Titan Watchers. But it's Diamonds instead like Rarity, obviously.
Should have kissed him on the lips.
For once, I AGREE with Applejack's notion here. And after this, I hope that Rarity can FINALLY date Spike, because it has been long overdue!!!
WTF!!??
I'm guessing that's monster Fluttershy as Doom Ducky.
When are you gonna kiss him on the lips?
To be frank, he should have thought of this and tested it earlier, and WOULDN'T waste a life for drama/horror effect.
True!
Applejack, you worry too much. At least it makes him "brave" enough for future horror encounters. It kinda happened the same thing with Fluttershy from the beginning of the show. Sort of.
To think that being a dragon, despite being a "baby/kid". He should have a lot of stamina or something?
Reference! Plus, why didn't Luna think of that, and make a FRICKIN MAP?
He has finished the fourth level/portal of the Dread Duckies/Doom Ducky. And it was Fluttershy's likeness as a swan. I bet she feels extreme regret for hurting Spike.
Still with the fourth wall? Never change Pinkie.