Celestia has an important duty, raising and lowering the sun, what most ponies don't know however, is that the sun wants to rise and that Celestia didn't get her cutie mark by lowering the sun with magic...
She got it by being more stubborn.
Been a few years, as it seems my interest is staying for now, I'll stick around. I've been writing for almost ten years now, with a specialty in Adventure/thriller.
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Thank you, dumb Discord conversations, for blessing this mess.
Oh my God you actually did it
lol, nice
THAT was a FUN READ...!!
The Sun, being browbeaten into submission by a white Alicorn...
"Celestia uses 'dissapointment'! It's SUPER EFFECTIVE!!!"
Oh, dear. Celestia's sun is a dead star. Who'd have thought you could beat the dead in a staring contest lol
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I mean, core of helium doesn't really have the same ring to it. Despite the fact it would be more accurate...
The sun just can't keep up with Celestia in its old, dead, age.
I did not know this. Note taken.
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Core of hydrogen, then?
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That would be a very young star, like newborn in cosmic years. I'll just keep it as is since this fic is already a crackfic based on a discord conversation. Funnier that way.
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A young star that act as child, and need to be put into bed
Alicorn eyes must be much stronger than other eyes.
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Perhaps, but the problem with iron cores is that they only last a few minutes before the star goes supernova.
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I've definitely read at least one other fanfic that headcanoned Celestia being capable of safely looking directly at the sun.
makes me think of scootertrix were celestia brunt her eyes staring at the sun
This has earned its place in my favorites shelf, and has earned you a follow!
...So, Fluttershy will be our Celestia, huh?
The sun being stubborn reminded me of a comic dub I'd seen where Twilight and the Sun itself were cursing at each other as well as staring.
Interesting idea, hilarious execution. Well done!
I am the 69th like...
No, I'm not happy about it...
No, I refuse to dislike the story out of spite.
Yes, I will make a comment just because of it.
>mortally challenged
Heh. The Dark Lord approves.
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Believe it or not. This fic was written as part of stupid discord conversation about an error in Marcato's fic.
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I thank you for the comment, and for the nice like.
Color me impressed, what a fun and amusing little story with exactly one thousand words. Thumbs up, and im favoriting this.
You won the battle Celestia, but you lost the war!
You gave Luna flashbacks to one of the most traumatizing moments of her life!
You Monster! Pulling out the disappointed look.
Take your like, you filthy animal. And a happy new year.
(The last line is a joke reference to Home Alone to those who don't get it.)
cute story!
Celestia has her own personal abyss it seems.
I have just read a fine work of art. Be blessed with a like and fave.
Next comes the tutting of the lips, the folding of the arms, and oh no, the tapping of the foot.
And then, as a substitute, The Great And Powerful Trixie arriives.
And there Will Be Poetry.
He knows like the no other the horrors there in.
She is a funny mare
I love silly stories like this. Bravo! Bravo to a fun story!
this is beautiful, keep it up!
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Ha, lol! Good story! You should have more Discord conversations, lol.
Cute! Celestia has a powerful mind! Too bad we didn't get to see Luna's resounding excitedness!
Celestial object VS Celestia?
That’s quite clever, you should probably take another swim at this sort of fics
Then a few hours later the burning pain will slowly up catch up to her.