A man named Alex, gets hit by a truck and dies. He wakes up in a strange place called Equestria as Penny Polendina. Little dose he or she knows, this isn’t a dream nor a nightmare, but a second life with a new body and abilities, Alex now Penny will soon learn this world has many dangers to face, but will “Penny” be strong enough to face them?
This was another idea I wanted to try out, I hope you’ll enjoy this fic.
Also I’m planing to an cover made for this if you guys know an artist, please give me a link.
Chapters (4)
nice cant wait for more to come out soon
I will watch your growth with great interest! This looks promising.
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Glad you both like this fic.
Finally! Another RWBY content to read!
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I have more Rwby fic’s if you are interested.
the way this chapter ended, it seems to be after Volume 8 and the beginning of Volume 9.
Penny died with her spirit becoming part of Winter and her body fell into the void...and here we have someone that most likely died in such a way that their body became unusable, but the spirit was free.
considering the odds of this fic, eventually Ruby and friends are going to meet this 'Penny'. at least, that's my guess.
I am unsiertan... there is a good story hrer but the exicusion needs a bit of work. The short paragrafs are mostly talking and vary little envaromental diskriptions. they seem to be a generick gray void whit a few items here and there, you should ad a bit more deskription to the sceen.
For example the bathroom
could be expanded to:
"As I steeped in to the bathroom, I could see that it had greek insparations.
The floor was white tile and was raised along one wall were a floor sunked bathtub that looked like it could comftably fit four pepole sitting in it.
Along the walls a mosaic depickting a stary night whit constalations, a few clouds and a cresent moon above the bathtub. In the corners were a column halping frame eche wall and along the bottom of the walls the mosaic was white like the floor giving the entire room the feeling of being on a cloud high up in the night sky leting you bathe among the stars.
It was beautiful."
enviromental depiktioning takes a lot of praktis and I'm not shore if I am good at it.
The speech is allso a bit clunky but both come with praktis.
the only other thing thats bugging me is: Penny is supose to be an android or was thier and upgrade somewere? I only know RUBY universe and characters in a general sence.
still looking forward for more of this story.
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thanks for the suggestion, to be honest. I’m dyslexic so I do tend to overlook the finer details in my storytelling.
in the future I’ll try to add more with the finer details, also the smaefgv with the dialogue.
thank you for your suggestions and support, also would you mind if I add you description of the bath in the chapter?
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Go right a head!
I am a dyslexic too, so I know the pain.
But the best way to overcome it is to praktis.
Wrothe a lot of poems when I was younger and that helped a lot whit figuring out the ditails.
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thanks for the suggetions.
it’s nice knowing there’s someone who’s dyslexic like me.
Isn't it a little too much? I mean, there is an character Alex who could be a self insert if you think about it. There is an Isekai killed by the truck, reincarnated as a character from RWBY. Then we can't forget about the ponies and we have to include them as well in the story. Wouldn't it be much easier to remove Alex from the story entirely and then write from the point of view of Penny?
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When you say self insert Alex you like Alex from V9?
V9 didn’t show us who Alex was when we wrote this.
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Hm? No, not her, I ve got an impression that Alex is someone else who is now wearing Penny's body. I meant people could project themselves on that person as they read the story I suppose.
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Ah, I see, this is a displaced fic, so they are usually written this way.
hay when will the next chapter come out?
When is the next chapter coming out just asking
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Hey guys, sorry for the wait, my personal life has kept my really busy, and it’s taking me longer to continue my fic.
I’m going to update this story before the year’s end, thank you for your patience and support.
Sorry but I t seems you got the skin wrong.
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Oh? Can you explain, please?
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Applebloom has yellow fur so if you are doing a fur=skin thing like EQ it has to be yellow if not then give her a lighter skin colour.
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oh, they fully humen in this AU.
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Than why white also are your other RWBY stories (the Cinder one) in the same world you don't have to make them meet just reference like Luna is doing paperwork and finds Cinder's file or Cinder hears of the lunar princess having a new friend thanks to some random rumours.
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okay, when I originally wrote this fic, I found a human AU pic and I used it as a reference for the CMC.
I will be more diverce with the other charaters.
Plus the other Cinder fic is it’s own AU, and again I found a Human Pic for reference.
Penny and Cinder won’t meet until I introduce the token system.
I’m sorry for any triggers and confusion, this may have caused.
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How long do you think before gender bent Pinocchio is combat ready again also can this one use floating array laser mode
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Probably the next chapter or the chapter after.
next chapter update?
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Hi, sorry for the wait, I’ve been a little too busy with personal lately.
but I do plan to update this before the years end, sorry to keep you waiting.
if your still looking for an artist for the cover try this one.
MaggiesHeartLove - Professional, Digital Artist | DeviantArt
Why not make this the actual Penny from RWBY instead of a random guy who just gets turned into Penny?
Author these ponies don't seem like well ponies.
11768193 Then it wouldn't be a Displaced story. There are similar stories where a guy was sent to the MLP as either Blake Belladonna or Yang Xiao Long.
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Thanks for the suggestion, I’ll keep it in mine.
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They not ponies, this is a Human Equestria, complete AU.
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Thanks Jiargent
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So is this supposed to be an anthro Equestria then with Celestia having gone mad and sentenced to the sun with Luna as a princess then? It just feels like quite a lot has changed and beyond a few names, it doesn't really seem that recognizable as Friendship is Magic.
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No this is my own AU, and they are Human not anthropogenic.
Also I’m not using anything from friendship is magic, instead of the names of characters and places.
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Why displaced and what benefits does this being a pretty far ponyless AU bring your story?
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The only answer I have is, this was an idea I had and I wanted to share it.
The benefit here is I can make my own MLP universe.
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Is it even My Little Pony though?
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Only with the characters names, some personality, and places.
Not using any plot elements from the show, and none use of songs.
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update on the next chapter?
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Not sure, yet.
Working on Age of devil fruits, at the moment.
I’ll let you know when I make a start, thank you for your patience and support.
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neo! well i do hope penny will tell the truth about who she once was so that they know that she is not the true penny at some point in time
still nice chapter can't wait for more to come out soon
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i think they might have disbanded but im not too sure myself at this time so i can't say for sure
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Haven’t you heard? Rooster Teeth is shutting down.
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I have a few plans for little Neo.