Raindrops believes her cutie mark predestined her to be a weathermare, but she was not content with that life. Then fate helped her accidentally drop a piano on the head of Celestia’s star pupil. With Raindrops depressed and adrift, her friend Seafoam convinces her to take a sightseeing cruise with a captain she knows. Raindrops heads out with Salty Breeze, but when the tour runs into a strange event the pair find themselves lost at sea. Worse, a massive storm is approaching quickly. Together, they must make it back safely and, along the way, perhaps discover what’s been missing in Raindrops’ life.
First!!!! haha!![:raritystarry:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritystarry.png)
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“I’ll pass, but maybe later. So what’s this thing you drug me out of bed to see?”![:pinkiegasp:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiegasp.png)
It is 'Dragged'. Small and I'm sorry but still. I think my short attention span made me find it difficult to read but I did it!![:derpyderp2:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/derpyderp2.png)
Not meaning any offence or anything, please don't take that the wrong way.![:pinkiesad2:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiesad2.png)
By the way, last and not least, this story was great! Very interesting and could lightly visualize every detail. Great!!! Thank you.
Golly, I remember I came upon this story a looong time ago on EqD. I still haven't finished it! I started reading it on Google Docs, but yeah. never finished it. What I read of it was absolutely GORGEOUS though, so I can't wait to!![:heart:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/heart.png)
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That was
Oh my god
SO GOOD.
HOW IN THE NAME OF CELESTIA DO YOU WRITE LIKE THAT?
I'm gonna do a critique on it in a few, so expect another comment. But, seriously, just a few grammatical things.
Don't change any of the content or anything.
To me, that stuff's all perfect
I really enjoyed this one. (though I usually think of Raindrops and Derpy as friends)
You mentioned all of my favorite background ponies
Rose, Sea, Derpy, and of course Rain. ![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
I noticed a couple typos, but other than that it was rather well written, good job!
This was the greatest thing...
ever...
of all time...
Hey! Didja notice? Raindrops got a character tag now so you can properly tag your story!![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
raindrops has her own character tag now.
Oooooh, I really liked this one. What started as just a simple little tale about a relaxing vacation became a journey of self-discovery. Very well done, sir.
Very well-written, well-plotted, the kind of story that the fandom needs more of.
Nice. You get your 'yours' and 'you'res' fuddled at times, and Raindrops seemed a bit too clued-up for someone who didn't know where she was going in life, but by and large pretty nice. Reminds me of Long Distance by Ezn, a little. Nice job, in short!
Yep, knew I read this before. Still awesome. Huh, first time I reread something.
Me likes.
It's bow or prow, not brow.
Good story, and an excellent bit of world building. There aren't enough ponies at sea stories.