Twilight had several analogies she liked to use to describe the difficulty of saying no to rarity, her favorite of which was "Imagine trying to flag down a train in the middle of the night while painted black...by jumping in front of it"
One peaceful spa trip with your friends isn't too much to ask, right?
Not when you're Twilight Sparkle......and definitely not when you're the Doctor's newest companion.
So when Zecora finds what appears to be a parisprite in the Everfree forest, but is actually something much, much worse, they have to race to make sure these parasitic creatures don't destroy Ponyville, or Equestria......or the world.
But of course nothing is that simple...... Twilight desperately wants to keep her friends out of the line of danger, but with Rarity playing matchmaker, Rainbow Dash playing spy, and Pinkie Pie being, well....Pinkie Pie, it's going to be a harder task than she thought.
Sequel to :The Changeling Princess
Don't listen to anyone says. This was amazing! Please keep it up. I'm really excited to see what's in store.
I think the reason for downvoting is because it looks too compressed. Hit the enter key twice instead of once and people will stop.
aside from that it's quite good.
@Thorlol I'll try that, thanks
@BreakawayPAK Thank you so much I love writing, so it will definitely take more that a few downvotes to get me down
when i saw partners in crime i remembered donna and realized she would not remember any of her adventures and started to cry a bit
yes of course time turner is in no way an alien time traveler
How does Twilight cast a dimensional distortion spell when she barely met the Doctor.
She replicated Gallifreyan technology with magic?! In the show the Doctor never had any problems making his pockets bigger on the inside.
Companions are supposed to be there to stand in awe of the Doctor's awesomeness, not try and be clever.
Unless Twilight is secretly a Time Lord
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I think that's one of the reasons that I think Twilight is a good companion for the Doctor.
Instead of simply standing in awe, she is inspired to try something new and learn even more.
Wow Doctor... Have someone who is scared of the dark? Tell them about the Vashda Nerada thinking it would help!
..Great plan Doctor, great plan..
I'm gonna use that as a joke some day when i find someone who is scared of the dark..
everyone has an irrational fear of the dark but it's not irrational it's the Vashda Nerada
Poor Doctor.. poor poor Doctor....
i have this strange image of rory in a nurses outfit and not the one he usually wears so yeah thanks for that. but aside from that keep up the good work
just have to hope this school doesn't explode like the last one the doctor was in
oh raindow dash, you're gonna buck this whole thing up arent you?
damnit spike why do you have to ruin a moment
I see what you did there
Was a Past Sins reference used in this?
I enjoyed it!
2462784 You took the words out of my mouth!!!!!
LOL... I loved this Chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Princess Sunbutt? My my you bad time-pony...
2677836 I believe she will *sighs*
Spike, wait!!!
Stupid
sexysuspicious Rainbow Dash...Sorry, but... You're taking Rarity way out of character in this. She's never that... Bizarre, in canon, so why here? I mean, she didn't go this crazy when she fantasized about having her own fairy-tale romance, for God's sake!
Doctor... Oh, Doctor.... You're not exactly making a good case that you and Twilight are "just friends" when you come up with nicknames for her like Thighlight Sparkle.
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In my head, I've always seen Rarity as the type who might go all ' self-appointed super over involved matchmaker' on her friends...her or possible Pinkie Pie....but I'm glad for your feedback
I try to do my best on writing the ponies in character, so it is great to get outside opinions on how I'm doing with it. Keeping character's true to to themselves is tricky buisness, as everyone has their own interpretation of the characters and the details of their personalities, but I think I have definitely come a long way (I will be the first to say that some of the characterization in my first story was incredibly wonky and a large reason why I'm doing the much needed rewrite), and hopefully with continued insight from readers I will continue to improve.
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Poor Twi...
But she's right, Sparky.
Rarity and RD are right, I mean.
The episode with the Vashda Nerada things scared me to....scaredness...?
....And ever since then, I never sleep in a room with two lights pointing in opposite directions (thus giving the illusion that you have two shadows..)....
....And I always leave the light on when I play my computer....
..........Well, some of the time....
...................Never mind................
Smiles
Next chapter
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I feel so sorry for The Doctor
Is there a third one!?!?