To help figure out a perfect way to start the next chapter, I tweak the ending to 1st chapter a little.

It's nothing major or over the top, but It helps me finally figure out a proper way to start chapter 2.

This is something that I had been meaning to do for a while now.

The main thing being re-edited is Celestia's and Luna's trip to the sex shop. Not the whole thing, but just before they leave.

Back when I first started writing this chapter, I literally planned to make this big scene involving Rarity, but I ended up completely forgetting it entirely and didn't notice until after I posted chapter.

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As mentioned in my last blog post, I will be making changes and additions to the previous three chapters. Originally the additions were minor and did not change things too much going forward, it was just supposed to help chapter 4 make sense. But now the changes are going to be bigger than I planned, as the new additions will change the timeline of the events we have seen so far. (Excluding the 1st chapter that is.)

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As mentioned in my last blog post, I will be making changes and additions to the previous three chapters. Originally the additions were minor and did not change things too much going forward, it was just supposed to help chapter 4 make sense. But now the changes are going to be bigger than I planned, as the new additions will change the timeline of the events we have seen so far. (Excluding the 1st chapter that is.)

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I been having a bit of writers block with this story, mainly because I need to make some changes.

Nothing over the top, I just need to a bit of re-editing for the previous chapters. I'm just taking some things out while adding new scenes. Like I said its nothing to big, just a way to help make the next chapter make sense.

I will let you know when the changes are made.

The update to "OPEN UP YOUR BUCKING EYES" was me hitting the publish button by mistake.

The extended chapter isn't finish yet.

Due to some difficulties. I will be reposting chapter 2 after making changes. The last 25% of the chapter will be changed entirely as I feel that I've been moving things too fast.

Though change might not be accurate depending on what I will do by the end. It's more of an extension, a long extension that will take place near the end of the original chapter 2.

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My story, "The Annual Homewrecking Contest" was taken down because of rules that I violated.

I'm now going to have to re-write the first chapter all over again from scratch in order for the story to not be a blatant copy of the original with minor edits. Good thing I only posted one chapter thus far, so it shouldn't be a problem to fix and improve things.

I have been working on the second chapter. So, I'll just post both chapters together when I'm done with them.

After 2 long years I'm finally getting back into this story. Now that I'm out of my rut. I plan to finish it.

Before I post the next chapter. I plan on re-editing the first. Its nothing major, I just need to remove a plot point I started.

The plot was that Celestia had been manipulating every major villain attack. Like nightmare moon's. Nightmare was actually supposed to be Luna pretending to be evil.

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