Proof Reader/Editor Needed · 12:13pm March 15th
Would anyone be interested in proof reading and editing some of my stories?
I’m really tired of all of the ‘it’s an interesting story but all these grammatical errors!’ comments.
I am the Knackerman. Most of my writing deals with horror, suspense, and tragedy. And yes, there will be gore.
Would anyone be interested in proof reading and editing some of my stories?
I’m really tired of all of the ‘it’s an interesting story but all these grammatical errors!’ comments.
Times the Candy Mare has canonically been defeated, by whom, and how in chronological order:
The Most Horrible Hearth's Warming EVER: A Candy Mare Tale - Princess Luna(Survived) - destroyed her candy ghoul army, put her in a coma, and dismembered her, eventually sealed in multiple statues so she could not regenerate
The Last Something Sweet to Bite - Sunset Shimmer (survived) - Released her stolen souls, then beat and burned her to death
Just wanted to get some thoughts down and share some insight into the latest entry in the saga of the Candy Mare.
A New Generation of Horror Starts Soon
art by Mutter_Butter
My eyes burn every time Night Mode gets turned off.
It’s been awhile since I’ve done one of these denouements for one of my stories. I don’t believe I did one for Candy Mare Goes to Hell, in the end, as that story was pretty self explanatory and most of its influences and references were pretty plain and easy to identify. (For those that may have skipped that story, it was influenced of course by Jason Goes to Hell, DOOM, Dante’s Inferno, Hellraiser, Sandman, Bastard!!, and Berserk.) Also Candy Mare Goes To Hell was kind of a goof off story, at
Celestia, Luna and Starswirl realise the long-term effects of losing Private Pansy on their world. Starswirl offers a solution that might affect the fates of Equestria - and a world without magic but with humans ..
Private Pansy makes it back to Canterlot after her encounter with the Candy Mare. As Starswirl, Hurricane and Clover fight to save her from her injuries, Celestia and Luna must make a decision about what action would be best for the future of the new nation of Equestria.
Summary: After witnessing the cruel fates of Hansel and Gretel, Strawberry Patch cannot believe the horrible truth that the Candy Mare is really her daughter, Pumpkin Patch. The Candy Mare reveals her plans for her mother while Private Pansy investigates the forest for the missing foals. Stay out of the abandoned cottage where you can hear childish crying, Pansy!