WRITE Review of Gentleman for Mares · 11:11pm Jun 9th, 2013
Well, seems it came through. The WRITE review. Here for display because Professor Plum insisted I advertise them 
(that was a joke). Format's not one you guys were used to seeing, and its primarily focused on faults and things to improve, so don't take it personally. As I've said a lot of times, Reviews are opinions. You can agree or disagree. I mostly just find what is most useful, and what is not.
Anyone expecting a shorthand version, well, sorry. Its very detailed, 3642 words, along with technical aspects that I found very interesting, and a few links that I will definitely find use for.
shira and I have went through the review (he more than I, though), and while both of us find the review solid, some parts he found a bit... unfair. I was going to question a few things myself, but I said, what the hell, use this review for future stories because Gentleman for Mares is... well, sad to say, coming to an end.
I don't know whether I'm proud or sad. This is probably one of the rare stories I actually completed. Any fans I have on the FF.net days that found themselves here can attest to that.
Anyways, later guys.
EDIT: Shira told me to add this since... well, some may misunderstand.
Gentlemen for Mares will end, yeah, but Harry's adventure will continue, one way or another. Still have to decide on it, though. ^_^
You should be proud.
Coming to an end? But...
Just... just give me a moment.
Well anyway I see a lot of the subjective parts of the review that I wouldn't personally agree with, but that's because they're subjective. He's right about 'Lee though. Bring her back!
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I'm always proud.
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Yeah... the more ideas I was going to use to expand the story, the more it was kinda moving away from the feel of the story. Harry may be back, and I got more stories in store for the Gentlemanverse, so we'll see.
As for Cheerilee...
don't kill me coz I have no idea.
1134637 Yeah, I guess there's no real way to carry that on without serious plot problems. She just seemed so lonely. Poor thing...
Hook her up with Derpy.
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You and your Derpy solution!
Cool beans.
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Never really got that expression. What does cool beans mean?
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It's a more positive version of "cool story, bro".
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Ah. XD Okay, got it. Thanks dude.
Welp, I'm not entirely sure how to react to this blog now.
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Um, why?
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Timing.
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>.>
Um, okay, I'm going to assume you mean the review may have something to do with it. If so, just want to say that causation is not causality.
Honestly, shira and I have been going back and forth on when it was going to end. The more ideas I had, the less it meshed with the feel of this current story. So, I decided that ending it, at least this story, is for the best, and continue with another story with a new feel and theme. Maybe start linking all my stories together. Working on my Changelings for this verse, and Harry may or may not be present for it.
Aquillo's review will definitely be something good to use for the future stories.
And if I read you wrong...
sorry. ^_^ What do you mean by timing, though?