If any chapter in the series so far has come close to breaking me, it’s this one. If I wasn’t reading the series to find out what it did wrong, if I was only reading it out of a trainwreck mentality, I would’ve quit here.
A little introspection is amazing. This chapter opens in a similar way to the previous one, with Bella still pining over Edward. But last chapter, she was doing everything she could to avoid thinking about him, so she came off as dull and insufferable. Here, she actually takes stock of her situation and what she should do about it. I still can’t say I sympathize with her — FOUR MONTHS — but I no longer want to beat her head into paste against a wall.
Bella and Alice arrive in Volterra to find the streets packed with people for St. Marcus’s Day. After driving as close to Edward as possible (which isn’t that close), Alice tells Bella to just get out of the car and run to him. Bella runs for three pages straight to get to Edward, reaching him right before he steps into the sun.
It was really him, no hallucination this time. And I realized that my delusions were more flawed than I’d realized; they’d never done him justice.
When Bella wakes up early in the morning, she sees Edward in her room and thinks that either she’s dreaming or she’s dead after drowning. No, I don’t get it, either. After too long, she finally concludes that, yes, the events of the past few days actually happened. Edward comments that he’s technically not supposed to be there, as Charlie banned him from the house.
After a week, Bella’s still alive; Victoria hasn’t gotten to her yet. Still, she’s nervous and jumpy. To make matters worse, she hasn’t heard from Jacob, through the phone or otherwise. It’s definitely not for a lack of trying on her part, since she’s tried to reach him every day. Occasionally dipping into unhealthy territory:
On Wednesday I called every half hour until after eleven at night, desperate to hear the warmth of Jacob’s voice.
CM + 1
Imma end this year with one of my own.
It's mah blog and Ah do what Ah want!
Anyway, this was my very first MLP:FiM fanfic, and at the time I was writing this, my last. I was going to get this one out of my system and then go back to working on my Ranma 1/2 story that I was right in the middle of. Obviously, that didn't happen on both accounts.
So with that, appreciate the old with the new and gaze upon the moon!
As the title mentions, this blog consists of all the characters of New Moon (At least the ones I have commissioned by artists). This blog is prone to updates as I am often ordering new artworks.
Hello all!
This is my first blog, so I want to start it with a bang that even Trixie would have to tip her hat to.
If you have seen the latest chapter from Product of Friendship, I will begin each chapter with a bio-list of all the relevant characters. My other story, New Moon, will also receive treatment to provide a clearer image of who's who in the story.
It's said that one of the best ways to improve your writing is to read. It helps expose you to new ideas and styles and can inspire you. It's also said that it's easier to define why something is bad than why something is good. Declaring something to be bad usually has very concrete reasoning behind it, while declaring something to be good can be a lot more nebulous.
Princess Celestia recently got the royal treatment in an op ed piece declaring that she was not a boring character. Well, I for one think that this notion is hilarious. Of course, she's not a boring character! The truth is, any character can be exciting, engaging or even interesting if handled properly. The problem with Princess Celestia is that she, for the most part, has been handled in a boring way.
I almost skipped this episode thinking it's that winter episode.
Why do cups have handles if the ponies hold them from the opposite side? And how can they hold it? And why are animators so lazy?
The snow is falling, but there's no snow on the ground or anywhere else.
Sunny puts pepper into the dough. Those are gonna be some spicy cookies...
Happy New Moon? So they celebrate every month instead of just once a year?
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