Hello , everypony neokiva here. With an update.

First things, first. I have completed the first draft of chapter 5 of the experiment. Wewt! Definitely got that draft done faster than the last chapter.
Now we are almost 5 chapters done, i wish to hear your honest thoughts.
So comment in here if you noticed any issues. However there are some provisos.
First No one line comments please don't waste your and my time when im trying to learn, elaborate expand upon what you want to say.

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