Updated Chapter 1 of "Traitor" · 5:26am Jul 13th, 2014
Added an extensive scene between Celestia and Discord in Chapter 1.
Added an extensive scene between Celestia and Discord in Chapter 1.
Argh. Now that I've gone and published the first chapter of the thing, I realize that the entire first section of "Traitor" still reads like it's trying to be a quick plot synopsis, which is where I was going with it originally before I realized that doing so was making it dry and unreadable. So now I need to expand the first chapter, as if it isn't annoying enough that this was supposed to be a 3,000 word prologue to "No Escape From Yourself" and it is turning into a 18,000 word story (and