Undergoin' renovations! · 7:16am Mar 30th, 2023
I'd like to start off by saying that I'm very happy to be back in the community again. Having just rewatched season one, it's sort of reinvigorated my passion for writing.
I'd like to start off by saying that I'm very happy to be back in the community again. Having just rewatched season one, it's sort of reinvigorated my passion for writing.
So I'm having a touch of trouble.
A character I'm really hyped for has been planned for the story from the start, but the reveal and the character are so out of left field that I'm afraid it might scare off readers or seemed shoed in.
I'm trying to figure this out but I'm scratching my head each time I crack open the text file. Any advice?
New chapter is in the way, and it's gonna be a bit longer than normal. I work every other day now, so I'm making time whenever I can.
Woooooo, two updates right off the bat with a third on the way! The awkward stilted balance between dialogues and actions is honestly my main problem with the story so far, but I've gotten the basic exposition for the first part of Lunar Plight out of the way.