And so Little Lost Raichu has come to an end and Little Lost Pikachu is up and running.
And so Little Lost Raichu has come to an end and Little Lost Pikachu is up and running.
Greetings my faithful readers.
After some thinking and checking the feedback, I decided that the sequel "Raichu, Defender of Equestria" can't exacly stand as it's own story, nor as a sequel.
Alright, here's the situation.
Beacuse Nica's time in Equestira made a shift into an adventure with big stakes, and since the main story was already very long, I wrote a sequel "Raichu, Defender of Equestira."
Considering 45 upvotes/3 downvotes ratio, low feedback and the fact that prologue in the sequel I added in hope it will explain the situation to new readers is also epilogue of the main story, (and may not be the best way to start a story), I feel a bit conflicted.
Alright, so here's the deal. While writting my tiny Twilight series, to celebrate 1000 likes on my Celestia's Tiny Student story, I wrote a blog called "Ask Twiny Sparkle"
While "Lost Little Raichu" is waaaay less popular, I still would like giving try to something similiar.
Considering that the story "Lost Little Raichu" is going to an end (the next chapter will be an Epilogue with link to the sequel), I would like to ask as follow:
After reading this story from prologue to chapter 25, is there anything in your opinion that can be improved before we move into the sequel?
Is there any chapter that seemed flawed/out of place that the story would benefit greatly if improved?
Greetings all fans of Nica and her adventures in Equestria.
I would like to inform you all about the side-story I uploaded and explain the meaning behind it.