Pinkamena's parents think there's something wrong with their daughter and decide to take her to see a doctor. Unfortunately, the doctor is a bit... Screwball-y.
A Lunaverse story for the May 2013 Writing Event. Non-canon.
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Well that was odd.
Thumbs up anyway.
IT MAKES PERFECT SENSE!!!!!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!
I'M SO CONFUSED
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Yeah...went through a few different ideas of someone to meet Screwball, but none of them really panned out. The one that I got the farthest on was with her and Luna playing a board game that changed everytime Luna looked away from it (started as checkers, then chess, shogi, mah jhong, dominoes, etc), but the conversation in between moves wasn't all that interesting. So yeah, decided "screw it, just going to finish the next one I think of," thought of Pinkie, and...yeah...
I do like the idea of Pinkie being part Discordian because it would explain A LOT but it would also just be weeeeeeeeeeeeeeird.
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LIAR! IT DOESN'T EVEN MAKE ANY SENSE TO ME!!!!!!!!
I'm starting to really like this idea of the mysterious screwball showing up from time to time as a playful observer making snide comment and jokes while being seemingly entirely in somepony's head... all the while never really doing anything directly.
This was very interesting. Over all I really liked it. Seeing Pinkie as something more than pony but less than discordian makes a lot of since honestly. And this being the second time I know of of Screwball popping up makes me really long for more shorts in the same spirit as this. Screwball being a behind the scene player is just too fascinating an idea to ignore.
On the negatives, I think it could of been tweaked a tiny bit here and there to give it a more serious tone. It was almost too lighthearted and self aware, But these are just nit picks.
Over all, really dug this and so get a thumbs up
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This was written late at night with a combination of first Mike's Hard Lemonade and then Mountain Dew Code Red to brew ideas and then keep me going, respectively. Trust me, I have more than mere nit picks about it myself
But yeah, I plan to do more of these whenever I get the chance, but coming up with a way to make her existence debatable is...tricky. That being said, I am eagerly looking forwards to doing some sort of side story for the whole Discord thing.
Screwball is best dessert topping, I mean appliance.
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Actually she's best drink.
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Sadly I can't pour the glass into the juice, and my whiskey adjuster is on the fritz again. Sounds delicious though. Will try later.