had their marefriend foalnapped - had their parents foalnapped a wonder, Jen was - a wonder Jen was the two the dead-weight - the two, the dead-weight tell my my pretty - tell me my pretty sped up, his hips - sped up. His hips ***** Excellent chapter, getting to see Luna happy considering what is happening in Mr. Silver's story is a nice change of pace. The extra addition to the story was nice to read and quite passionate as well. I hope we get to learn about Jen and Sablee in the future, which will make their moments of passion even more satisfying to read about.
I apologize, this is going to be a quote-filled comment, but there were just so many things going on that drew a positive reaction while reading.
I can feel them.
Them?! Congratulations! Stick is much more potent than anyone expected.
There was a fervent hope that Jen hadn't done any clop-art.
Given what follows, it feels fair to say that this particular hope has been dashed, and quite thoroughly too.
This was quite possibly the best rebound-sex she had ever had, with the added bonus of not having to see her ex ever again.
Ah, they're both kind of on the rebound. Very serendipitous for Sablee.
I'm not saying to redo the scenes per se but rather add the clop scenes that are implied. I'm sure I'm not the only who would appreciate it if you did go back and add them, and not just Penny getting pregnant.
7025447 There, and yeah that was the plan, pretty much add the fun where the teen rating caused me to 'fade to black'.
7025282 All typos clopped until they can't clop no more. "I can feel them." In this case the 'them' is used in place of knowing what gender the foal is.
Also, it never ceases to astound me how much porn I read/view is created by women. I used to subscribe to a comic-porn thing called Slipshine, and a huge majority (of the ones I liked to read) were done by females. And I am not even going to get into actual book-porn, like the Anita Blake series, hot dang that girl gets around.
And yes, part of this was showing that the connection between them was a two-way thing. Neither took advantage of the other, it was just two 'ponies' enjoying themselves.
7025499 Years and years ago, some of the most intensely passionate Ranma 1/2 'lemon' fanfics, at least to my teenage at the time opinion, were written by the few female fans on the internet at the time. One of my favorites was also from Australia, coincidentally. I wonder whatever happened to Caroline Seawright a.k.a. Kunoichi. Ah...memories.
7025588 I had the good fortune to be able to attend a local Fansub group called No-Name Anime that held regular showings of Ranma and other series or movies on a regular basis. Sadly they closed their doors back in 2013, end of an era.
7026842 Ranma 1/2 was the gateway for many of the anime fans that got their start in the late 80's through the 90's, myself included. My first real reintroduction to it beyond the American adaptation of Macross known as Robotech was Urusei Yatsura which led me to more works by Rumiko Takakhashi, including Ranma. Ranma proved to be a rich inspiration for fanfiction of all colors and flavors, including many decidedly adult explorations of the concepts and issues raised in the cannon series, and the rapid expansion of the internet during the time made it spread like a wildfire among the fans that were hungry for more good storytelling. But I suspect you already know this.
"It is great, I only have the last few symbols left to do and, Giddilee says I will be rising to a rank two on the weights any day now."
do, and Giddilee
The princess of the night couldn't hold running to protect her mate from distress against Penny, the three looking very much like a wonderful little herd.
for a first clop chapter this is good.
I am impressed good job.
7024345 This is far from the first time I have written such, oh not by a long shot. It is just the first I have published here
7024380 aww ok. I am kind of hoping you keep this thread going as FIE is vary rare and this one is done right.
piece.
me
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This keeps going and it will be a double wedding or one BIG herd.
Will you be going back through the prequel and adding the implied adult scenes to here or will it just be from chapter 77 and later?
7024952 Still pondering that. I may go back and redo the scenes that got Penny pregnant, will be some shape-changing shenanigans in there
had their marefriend foalnapped - had their parents foalnapped
a wonder, Jen was - a wonder Jen was
the two the dead-weight - the two, the dead-weight
tell my my pretty - tell me my pretty
sped up, his hips - sped up. His hips
*****
Excellent chapter, getting to see Luna happy considering what is happening in Mr. Silver's story is a nice change of pace. The extra addition to the story was nice to read and quite passionate as well. I hope we get to learn about Jen and Sablee in the future, which will make their moments of passion even more satisfying to read about.
I apologize, this is going to be a quote-filled comment, but there were just so many things going on that drew a positive reaction while reading.
Them?! Congratulations! Stick is much more potent than anyone expected.
Given what follows, it feels fair to say that this particular hope has been dashed, and quite thoroughly too.
Ah, they're both kind of on the rebound. Very serendipitous for Sablee.
7025204
I'm not saying to redo the scenes per se but rather add the clop scenes that are implied. I'm sure I'm not the only who would appreciate it if you did go back and add them, and not just Penny getting pregnant.
7025447 There, and yeah that was the plan, pretty much add the fun where the teen rating caused me to 'fade to black'.
7025282 All typos clopped until they can't clop no more. "I can feel them." In this case the 'them' is used in place of knowing what gender the foal is.
Also, it never ceases to astound me how much porn I read/view is created by women. I used to subscribe to a comic-porn thing called Slipshine, and a huge majority (of the ones I liked to read) were done by females. And I am not even going to get into actual book-porn, like the Anita Blake series, hot dang that girl gets around.
And yes, part of this was showing that the connection between them was a two-way thing. Neither took advantage of the other, it was just two 'ponies' enjoying themselves.
7025499
Years and years ago, some of the most intensely passionate Ranma 1/2 'lemon' fanfics, at least to my teenage at the time opinion, were written by the few female fans on the internet at the time. One of my favorites was also from Australia, coincidentally. I wonder whatever happened to Caroline Seawright a.k.a. Kunoichi. Ah...memories.
7025562 Well, now here is something funny. Back in the day of Ranma 1/2, did you ever get the fansub vids, in about 320x240 res, by Anime Madness?
7025588
I had the good fortune to be able to attend a local Fansub group called No-Name Anime that held regular showings of Ranma and other series or movies on a regular basis. Sadly they closed their doors back in 2013, end of an era.
7025981 Ahh. Ranma 1/2 was the first anime I watched and finding it, I needed more.
7026842
Ranma 1/2 was the gateway for many of the anime fans that got their start in the late 80's through the 90's, myself included. My first real reintroduction to it beyond the American adaptation of Macross known as Robotech was Urusei Yatsura which led me to more works by Rumiko Takakhashi, including Ranma. Ranma proved to be a rich inspiration for fanfiction of all colors and flavors, including many decidedly adult explorations of the concepts and issues raised in the cannon series, and the rapid expansion of the internet during the time made it spread like a wildfire among the fans that were hungry for more good storytelling. But I suspect you already know this.
Are you going to do chapter 48?
7032381 Hrmm, I might need to set up some kind of voting thing for this
7033185 lol
do, and Giddilee
Should probably be Princess of the Night.
Almost.
Hub Cardboard. The latest in technology.
run-on. semicolon or period would fit here.