After vanishing from a curse for more than 1000 years, little is known about the Crystal Empire and its inhabitants. Especially the final years of King Sombra's rule remain shrouded by mystery. Even to the crystal ponies themselves as their memories remain effected by the tyrant King's dark magic.
Now the Crystal Empire has returned and King Sombra has been defeated, but the aftermaths of his cruelty still linger within his former subjects.
One crystal pony begins travelling through Equestria to learn about her past and finds friends along the way. Will revealing her past help her understand more of herself and find a place in this new future?
Her first trip leads her to Sweet Apple Acres in Ponyville, where she meets the Apple family and the recently coronated Princess of Friendship.
Now with a sequel: Crystal Note II Memories and Magic
Welcome to this new project I had on my mind for a while now. This is the first story of a mini-series, more sequels are definitely planed.
Hope you enjoy reading and any feedback and suggestions are more than welcome!
Very well written
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Thank you very much!
Hi is it ok if I could publish this story to a group
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Sure, feel free to do so. Absolutely no problem.
Definitely a nice story, and not hard to follow.
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Thank you!
I keep reading it again and again
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Hopefully I'll have the first sequel ready soon.
A very enjoyable read.
Interesting and original storyline - well done!
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Glad you liked it
First off, the story was awesome. I loved how you showed how Sombra's reign affected the crystal ponies in an adverse way. Also, through Crystal Notes story, you also showed how friendship can help heal wounds. Both mental and physical.
Good work and keep it up.
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Thank you for your kind words! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
If Crystal Note had a voice actress, what would she sound like?
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Wow, that's a hard question.
I think her voice would be very Fluttershy-ish as in very tiny and soft when she talks to somepony but very clear and colourful when she sings. In my head it's also changing a lot, like the colour of her coat with her emotions. Overall I think she would go best with a generally deeper, alto voice. When I write, I usually have this typical narrator-bedtime-story in my mind for her.
I hope this answers your question at least somewhat
A trip down memory lane is rarely this pleasant
That's just it; from day one you have been writing better than most on this site. Spelling, grammar and legibility are top notch. The only thing you need is an editor. Sometimes you put a space between paragraphs and other times you don't. Once FimFiction gets its hands on it you get the result above; big blocky wall of text with the odd space in between.
It saddens me that more have not read this.
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Glad you enjoyed coming back to this
Yes, I desperately need an editor/proofreader, but finding one is difficult, especially when I sometimes don't finish anything for months to publish.
Very nice!