Ending changed for Flurry’s Favorite Guard (HISHE) · 11:14am Yesterday

To help figure out a perfect way to start the next chapter, I tweak the ending to 1st chapter a little.

It's nothing major or over the top, but It helps me finally figure out a proper way to start chapter 2.

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TOPEN UP YOUR BUCKING EYES!!!!!
MLP: FiM
Drama
Mystery
Tragedy
Raven Inkwell figures out the real reason why Discord was easily forgiven for his crimes and plans to expose all the lies that have been told.
Violence
Profanity
Alt. Universe
Celestia
Discord
Main 6
Raven Inkwell
Grace Manewitz
Mpony1 · 34k words · 36 18 · 1.3k views
TOBJECTION!!!!!! Spike's Sacrifice Was Completely Unnecessary (The Retrial)
MLP: FiM
Drama
Mystery
Tragedy
Chrysalis and Tirek are soon to be sentence to death for the murder of Spike The Dragon. Raven Inkwell steps in to defend them and prove their innocence and expose the truth.
Profanity
Spike
Main 6
Raven Inkwell
Smolder
Grace Manewitz
Mpony1 · 17k words · 18 17 · 797 views
TA Debt That WILL Be Repaid
MLP: FiM
Comedy
Drama
After Twilight learns about a large debt that Equestria owes to the many different kingdoms. She vows to pay it all back as well as make Celestia pay for using her.
Sex
Violence
Profanity
Twilight
Celestia
Mpony1 · 0 words · 88 14 · 0 views
TThe Stupidity of The Crimes of the Condemned and those who followed. (Remake)
MLP: FiM
Drama
Tragedy
All they had to do was one simple thing but instead they decided to be stupid and that stupidity nearly cost us everything. Their decision to not take proper actions will be their downfall.
Profanity
Anthro
Human
Alt. Universe
Celestia
Luna
OC
Shining Armor
Mpony1 · 9k words · 18 20 · 1.1k views
TI'm not the shy, timid girl that everyone thinks I am.
Equestria Girls
Romance
Drama
Mystery
Fluttershy gets upset at Rainbow for putting all the blame on their friends for thinking she murdered her, and explains to her why they were just as much in the wrong.
Alt. Universe
Rainbow Dash (EqG)
Fluttershy (EqG)
Main 7 (EqG)
Mpony1 · 3.1k words · 21 10 · 1.2k views
TNever bet what you aren't willing to lose
Equestria Girls
Romance
Comedy
Drama
Twilight and Cadence will learn the consequences of making promises you can't keep as well as using others just to settle a bet.
Profanity
Dean Cadance
Sci-Twi
Main 7 (EqG)
Mpony1 · 8.6k words · 25 11 · 1.2k views

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Ending changed for Flurry’s Favorite Guard (HISHE)

To help figure out a perfect way to start the next chapter, I tweak the ending to 1st chapter a little.
It's nothing major or over the top, but It helps me finally figure out a proper way to start chapter 2.
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2 weeks
A chapter for Sunset's Special Detention will be taken down for re-editng

This is something that I had been meaning to do for a while now.
The main thing being re-edited is Celestia's and Luna's trip to the sex shop. Not the whole thing, but just before they leave.
Back when I first started writing this chapter, I literally planned to make this big scene involving Rarity, but I ended up completely forgetting it entirely and didn't notice until after I posted chapter.
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5 weeks
More NEWS for: OBJECTION

As mentioned in my last blog post, I will be making changes and additions to the previous three chapters. Originally the additions were minor and did not change things too much going forward, it was just supposed to help chapter 4 make sense. But now the changes are going to be bigger than I planned, as the new additions will change the timeline of the events we have seen so far. (Excluding the 1st chapter that is.)
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5 weeks
More NEWS for: OBJECTION

As mentioned in my last blog post, I will be making changes and additions to the previous three chapters. Originally the additions were minor and did not change things too much going forward, it was just supposed to help chapter 4 make sense. But now the changes are going to be bigger than I planned, as the new additions will change the timeline of the events we have seen so far. (Excluding the 1st chapter that is.)
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5 weeks
NEWS FOR: OBJECTION

I been having a bit of writers block with this story, mainly because I need to make some changes.
Nothing over the top, I just need to a bit of re-editing for the previous chapters. I'm just taking some things out while adding new scenes. Like I said its nothing to big, just a way to help make the next chapter make sense.
I will let you know when the changes are made.
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