Words can hurt. Sometimes, that hurt is permanent.
One too many accidents results in a falling out between you and Rainbow Dash, the mare of your dreams, and your friendship with her lies on the brink of destruction. Twilight suggests a vacation to clear everyone's head. Could this be your last chance to make amends, or will you spend the rest of your life filled with regret?
Alternate Universe for wingless Princess Twilight. Might just change this out, because it's a pointless change, tbh. :)
This is a story I've been fantasizing about in my head for a while now. It's had some changes in its development for later chapters to make sense.
Story cover edited by me, original drawing by the lovely RatOfDrawn.
Chapters (14)
Good good, my sir.
6122038 Much thanks to you, sir.
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6122091 Congradulations sir, You had my curiosity, now you have my full attention.
6122405 Ah, excellent. :3
You, good sir have captured my attention.
I shall follow this story, and I shall read it, until the very end.
It sounds interesting, and I approve! :D
Good job, and I will see you next chapter.
6122607 Thanks! I'm glad you like it so far!
6122742
No problem!
Keep up the good work man.
6122941 Thank you.
6122967
You're welcome once more
Ima keep my eye on this one.
6124445 Thanks! It means a lot!
When do you think the next chapter will be out?
6124460 All of the chapters are completed. I'm releasing them on a schedule of Sundays, Mondays, and Tuesdays every week. There are more users on the site on those days, which gives this story more exposure.
I'll be posting the next chapter tomorrow, but the next chapter after that won't be out until at least Sunday or Monday. This will allow people to be excited for the next chapter and anticipate it.
6124467 Awesome!
6124473 I'm glad you like the story so far. I hope you continue liking it to the end!
This is gonna be one of those OC's that get betrayed or exiled then return 10 years later to become an powerful OC that has changed not only in person but also in attitude . I love one of those types of stories, any way liked it faved it.
6125418 Wait and see, my friend. Glad you enjoy the story so far!
Oh I get where this is going. that's actually a pretty decent story your writhing. still faved it and liked it
6126836 Thanks, dude. Glad you like it so far! It gets better, trust me. :)
Though I am not a fan of the 'Sunday, Monday, or Tuesday' schedule you put, I can at least understand why.
As for the story though..
I am enjoying it. A lot. And I will keep on reading every chapter you put out. Hope to see the chapter again on Sunday!
I'm liking this story so far, keep up the great work!
Ahhh dang it, he didn't make it in time. Now what will he do?
Won't know... until next time~ :D
Awesome job man, looking good so far, nice job! ^v^
So why is Daring Do's book not enough of a gift? I would have thought that a not yet published book by her favorite author in the author's satchel would make her day....
Buck it! This is Painblow Death we are talking about. A filly who freakin' kicked a dragon in the mouth. She deserves his head on a plate.
He should show his love by removing his heart,
put it in a box,
put that box in another box,
put that box in another box,
then mail that box to himself
...and when it arrives...
smash it with a hammer!
6127686 Thanks!
6127649 Thanks! :)
For some reason I tried to narrate the story in Alan Wakes voice.
If it came to a single ticket costing 1,000 anything I would have said hell no to that option! Guy is crazy!
Anyways great story keep up the great work! :)
6128041
Nice movie reference bro
6128691 Thanks, dude.
6128041 I couldn't help but read that in Pinkie Pie's voice...... Now I know why people don't ask Pinkie for dating advice.
must.... see... more... chapters...
6127545 The schedule is mostly because the most users are on for those days, so the story has the best exposure. I'm glad you understand though.
I'm glad you like the story! The next chapter will be up by Sunday! I can assure you that!
6130033
Love it so far especially the way you put US into it that's a bit more unique than I usually see :D plus it helps that's my favorite particular character
6130599 He likes how you are using second person POV
6128701 I am glad someone got it!
6129293 Well that... and Pinkie is the jealous type...
Help me!!!! Seriously get me out of here... The hair thing alone is enough to creep me out, but the ability to appear anywhere is the scariest stalking ability in the world
I heard that!!!!
6130186 Glad you like it so far!
6131002 *closes all doors and boards up everything.* *enters a bunker that is so deep the heat of the floor is a toaster turned on.* CAN'T GET ME CAN YOU?!
6131941 And then you burn to death from the floor's intense heat.
You've met with a terrible fate, haven't you?
6132258
Instantly my favorite wrighter for mutitide of reasons -inspiration for my own work to come -funny as all hell -referenced a creepypasta -is in fandom im now apart of :and all this makes me smile a lil wider like the story with derpy and dinos..he'll broke free from the innocent
6132472 The reference was actually from Majora's Mask. :derpytongue:
But welcome to the fandom! :D
6132258 Hmm let me check my profile for a moment...... I'm a almost indestructible hulk who killed 1 billion beings over the years and I die by 3rd degree burns? IRRRRRELEVANT!
6128354 No problem man.