Three best friends end up in Equestria but not all of them are ponies. One who isn't a brony, and even borderlines on being a hater, is a griffin. Another who is more calculating and cocky but hates hiding is a changeling. Finally the last of them is a unicorn who's special talent is that he adapts and overcomes. Together these three best friends will fight changelings, ponies, demigods, and the god of chaos himself.
Artwork by Sara Germany (shaya.laperro@gmail.com). (http://saracorgi.deviantart.com/ )
Something new and interesting and not sarcastic in an HiE fic!?
Inconceivable!
Seriously though, this is a pretty good start and it is quite interesting.
Can't wait for more!
This certainly looks promising.
Seems like you need an editor. There's some tense confusion. Still, good attempt.
1049286 Taoyang, you might want to use a different image site. The mod of http://dropline.net that you're using seems to be a....complete asshat.
Oh, and this story intrigues me as well. Will follow it close enough to read the amusing bumper stickers.
I thinks its a great story.I say keep it up.
My bad
"get pony book to somepony who can use pony book to save ponyland", that is pure gold
I like where this is going. More please.
Interesting, I'm going to be watching this.
It's a bit far fetched that Ancro knows that cross dimensional travel generates quantum harmonic wavelengths that can cause temporal instability but doesn't know how to read pony.
AWWW YEAAHHH. Can't wait to see what happens
How come Rainbow Dash always happens to crash into ponies or other creatures that are clearly injured or having a bad day?
Love the story btw.
Looks like you've solved the tense problems, so I'll give it a like.
Tip: When ponies shout, instead of:
"RAINBOW DASH!!!!!" Pinkie shouted
write
"Rainbow Dash!" Pinkie shouted.
This makes your writing seem more professional.
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Thanks for the pointers
MAKE MOAR GOOD SIR
NINJA ICE CREAM!!!
hells yeah
The factory? *Gasp* MURDERER!
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Scootaloo has no chance
omg lag!!!
got to keep those rainbows in the sky Fedora.
Let me know if my writing has suffered any as well.
MOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAR s
that is all
Excellent story line and writing. Keep it up!!
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Your writing hasn't suffered. It's still its normal, awesome self.
Keep up the good work man!
The changelings are going to be in for a surprise when their ally turns out to not be an ally.
me gusta
ahhhhhhh shits
Nice keep them pumped out
Dis gunna be gewd.
Shit's about to go down
All heck is about to break lose. Why do i have the feeling this won't end well for anybody.
lol using the DBZ reference, I have to agree that Scott is pretty much comparable Krillin
Excellent....I look forward to more
Wow. Once again incredible sir! Eagerly looking forward to the next chapter.
EVERYBODY HIT THE DECK!!!
SHITSTORM INCOMING!!!
I already feel sorry for the changlings with what's possibly coming their way.
"IT'S A TRAP!!!"
-Admiral Ackbar
-wargod
The you know what has hit the fan. I wonder who these two group's of Changelings serve. Will Discord end up breaking free soon? What will happen to our three heroes? Will they end up working for Discord and become enemies of the mane six?
Que gambit pileup in three, two, one...
@nightmaster0
-announcer voice- Stay Tuned and fInd out in the Next Episode of THE TRIUMVIRATE!
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You always know how to make my day with this story!
i love this .... moar ...Moaaar.... MOaaaaaaar MOAAARRRRRRR....MOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAR MOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAR
-wargod
Will Ancro get out of this alive? What will Cadence think about the fact Ancro saved her from the other changelings?
Also forgot to say in the credits if you fav it like it!
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I did already. And I like the fedora!
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yay
I'm half expecting Discord to break free again from all this chaos.
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Excellent as always Fedora man!
Princess Mi Amore Cadenza, now in smokey bar-b-que flavor.
OMG pink ninja!