I am a big fan of Starlight Glimmer most of my stories center around her. I do crossovers as well.
After Chrysalis causes Spike to be badly injured due to pulling his wings too much, he is sent to the hospital to find a way to recover from this. We will now see how Spike’s friends cope with their friend being injured, and subsequently his enemies.(Only the first chapter has gore but not too much)
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Cool. I'm glad it's back.
Poor Spike.
Good to see this story back. Looking good so far, but if I may offer one small critique, having Ember repeat exactly what Thorax thought about "Rainbow holding something small" is a little...coincidental, even if you say she was echoing Thorax's thoughts. Maybe have her word it differently, or just for future reference. It's a really good start though!
Two chapters in one day? On a roll! Poor Discord though, I feel bad for him
Yeah they did 😢
I was wondering what happened to your story but it looks like you going to rewrite it again and it's a good Improvement so it looks like Chrysalis had a very nasty idea taking Spike as a hostage and even threatening to tear off his wings if Twilight and the others don't give up but Queen Chrysalis went too far and starting tearing his wings and basically torturing him and Twilight couldn't stand it no more after hearing his scream she basically blasted the three of them and use the Bell to take away their powers but right now Spike is hurt and he needs to take him to the hospital before things could get worse for him I wonder what the others will think of this guess we'll find out next time
Yikes that was pretty intense and now things got really sad now so Discord Starlight Luna and Celestia and the pillars are still waiting that Twilight and the other stop the legions of Doom but the girls return to free the others but right now rainbow is not happy for what Discord did not only he lied about this whole situation almost caused Equestria to break apart almost letting the Legions of Doom to Concord the world and almost killing Spike and Discord didn't want to believe that Spike would not be this injured this badly but he is and the others were pretty devastating hearing the news and now Discord felt like crap I'm sure this is not what he wanted us to happen but his action almost got somebody killed I wonder what's going to happen next guess we'll find out next time
Safe to say Discord's going to be kicking himself for this.
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Can’t say I blame him.
How’s the story?
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Pretty good so far.
Poor Spike and Twilight...
Oh man that is some pretty upsetting situation here so it looks like spike is waking up after that little battle with the legions of Doom and when he saw the doctor he asked him what's going on he told them what happened what Twilight said and Spike was pretty surprised and sad at the same time that Twilight has to go through something like this speaking on Twilight she was really having a bad nightmare after that little battle she really can't get over what just happened which it's very hard to do especially when your loved ones are in trouble before the nightmare gotten worse Princess Luna came there and tried to calm her down and tell her that spike is okay but Twilight still felt like she could have done something more than that or else this would never happen especially to spike everybody has to go through something they just have to have each other's back In This Moment after that she woken up she went downstairs and saw Starlight and right now they just need each other to comfort at this moment I wonder what the others are thinking as well guess we'll find out next time
Can'thelp with wonder who's going to be in worse shape: Spike for being tortured like he was or Twilight for seeing Spike be tortured, but not being able to do anything about it before she finally snapped.
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Okay the If I Can’t Love Her reference was intentional. This one was an accident.
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It was supposed to be a joke because of the name of the story it kind of reminds me of the song kind of
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I know. I was just clarifying.
Can’t wait to see how this goes 🍿
nice work on all chapters
Added to m read list.
I think I speak for everyone when I say that we NEED another chapter of this ASAP.
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I think this story is dead
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We can always hope.
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Same here