This is my favorite ship. Which one is yours
Twilight and her friends were invited to celebrate Hearths Warming at the Crystal Empire, abandoning Spike in the process. Spike is sad and wonders what he should do. Then, bad things start to happen around Ponyville and the Everfree Forest. Can spike with the help of a new friend of his stop these bad things before it hurts everyone in Equestria?
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If I'm Spike, I would've just ran away, found a new place to live, and just forget about them just like they forgot about him.
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I have things planned for this story.
Also as I said in the note, this is my second attempt at a story. Any feedback for me?
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It's your story, you do what you want, but I would just have Spike find another place to live, or just walk out on the job, and I hope the Main 6 get yelled at for forgetting Spike.
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I'm not planning to have Twilight or the others in this story, but I'm planning to have this as a multistory series. You will see them again
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Ok, I'll just follow this as far as it'll go.
👍👍👍👍
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I'm glad you like my story. What do you think is gonna happen? I know what will happen, but what do you think will happen?
Well this chapter proves two things to me:
1. Spike never should've gone back to them in the aftermath of "Owl's Well That Ends Well", he should've stayed somewhere else around those who would BOTH appreciate & accept him for who he is instead of those that don't.
2. Spike should've stayed with the dragons at the dragon migration. Attempting to learn more about dragons so that not all are what picture them as beats having to deal with the main 6 any day of the week.
Do you think he'll be able to solve the riddle?
This is getting good.
Glad Spike's ready to leave those ingrates behind for a better life. Eventually we'll come to see how they like it when he's no longer there to do their bidding anymore.
Were those Spike's REAL PARENTS?
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Yep. You'll find out what happened to them in a later story which is directly related to this one.
What wouldn’t they bring Spike along? They usually bring him along to celebrations unless they don’t have a choice.
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Thanks. I hope you took a look at my comments for the previous chapters.
Do you think the letter was from the ALTERNATE UNIVERSE version of Spike?
I almost thought Spike would be going solo on this journey. I can only imagine what Shooting Star would say to Spike's friends & family when she eventually confronts them about their actions.
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I planned to have Shooting Star go with Spike on the journey to find Dark Alternate Spike from the very beginning. Since you're here though, what do you think the letters on the paper could possibly mean
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At this point, I've yet to have even the slightest idea or clue. I'm following the story along as it goes.
Come next time, the two SPIKE'S will finally meet FACE-TO-FACE.
If THAT how's S.S'S alternate reality was, I'm now curious on how Spike's alternate reality might end up.
Looks like Spike really did make the right decision to leave T.W., her friends, & family behind after all.
UH-OH.
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Uh oh indeed. Just wait until you see the rest of this story
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Right.
Well to be fair, all of this is just an illusion created by Timor. This wouldn't really happen, but Spike and Shooting Star don't know that yet
Even if they di manage to stop Timor, what do you think will be Spike's final decision upon deciding to either leave or stay in Equestria?
Did it look like Spike & S.S. was using this opportunity to take their anger & frustrations out on the DARK versions for all the times of being left behind?
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Well Shooting Star barely know the dark versions of the element, princesses or Shining. It was just mostly Spike
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Works for me.
Spike needs to have a serious talk with twilight when she comes back. She says he is family but doesn't act like much.
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I agree. He should practically disown them after this. I don't think having to put up with their problems & shenanigans is even worth it.
Well done here, Can you by chance give readers a hint to the plot of your NEXT story? IN addition, WHO was it exactly that left those gifts for them?
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Did it. You're welcome
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Sure. About your next story, Who will it be focusing on?
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Well in this chapter, I hinted at a budding relationship between Spike and Shooting Star, so I will definitely go deeper into that. I will also make sure Spike gets the respect he deserves, along with Twilight and her friends getting justice. There's also another character I will keep secret until the introduction, so that character will get the spotlight too and of course the old threat from 13,000 years. So to answer your question, it will focus on a few characters.
Also, how would you rate my story out of 10?
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1. Excellent.
2. I hope this comes about in your next story.
3. I'm looking forward to meeting this NEW character.
4. Me personally, your story gets a 10 out of 10.
5. IN addition, WHO was it exactly that left those gifts for them?
Will Shining Armor, Cadance, Celestia, Luna, her parents, and the crystal ponies get mad at Twilight and her friends for not taking Spike with them? Since they told Twilight to invite all of her friends. Including Spike.
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1. Glad you think so
2. I'm sure you won't be disappointed
3. I'm pretty sure you will grow fond of this new character pretty quickly
4. Thank you so much
5. That is to be answered in the next story. I made some edits so it has a note between the gifts.
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Can you guess what Timor means?
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1. Sure.
2. Hoping I won't.
3. Hoping I do.
4. You're very welcome.
5. Really?
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I can try.