Revised Chapter is now up. · 8:05pm 6 days ago
For those who wish to reread the chapter now with the intended content, the link is here: Revised Chapter
I write sins... NOT tragedies. Link to Patreon
For those who wish to reread the chapter now with the intended content, the link is here: Revised Chapter
Do you see this horse here?
A warning to all readers, she ALWAYS has the hardest time in my works. If you see Rarity, and she's in a starring role (which she will probably be as she's my favorite character) expect me to torture her in some way psychologically.
Lunar Engagement: working on it, but got stuck on chapter 3.
Ultramare: Have ideas for future episodes, will post them up when they're written.
Inner Demons II: Cancelled. Don't ask about it anymore, please.
Tales of Equestria: Want to continue, but afraid to. Don't know if it's any good.
Metal Gear Sonata of Faith: Also want to continue, but stuck on chapter 3. Might need to play Metal Gear Solid again...
For those who wish to reread the chapter now with the intended content, the link is here: Revised Chapter
It's been 10 years since the end of Inner Demons 2....
I know that you stated to not ask about it, but in the comments section you mentioned perhaps giving a reboot? I just binge read this series over the past week and I must say that I really enjoyed it. I know its based on a kids tv show, but the story and plot itself feels like it belongs in a novel. I was really disappointed to learn that the story had been canceled. Are you still planning on giving a reboot? If you are, I have a few suggestions. Firstly, the "too many characters" argument can be solved one (or two) of two ways. You can kill off characters after slightly developing them (which makes the readers sad) and you can split the characters up like you had done in the original story and develop each of their arcs. This is a commonly used method in TV/Books and can be done really successfully. Just make sure to tie all the arcs together at the end. Also there are some things in the story that may make readers feel uncomfortable such as the Twilight incest and the Applejack polygamy (maybe less), and I think these aspects should either be HEAVILY refined or simply removed. I also really enjoyed the Vale/Spike Arc which was my favorite. Hopefully you do plan a reboot because I really thought you had something going there. I do recall that you mentioned in a comment that you wanted reader feedback. Heres the feedback that I think all of your readers share: We see great potential in your story and trust your writing ability.
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Welcome to the group.
3163532 Alright. I was wondering. Thanks!