it sounds better when rapped but what ever.

Name’s Zappo call me the mad jester I like to hang with my friends we chillin about to go campin with these beats and my team and I know you can't deny that in the end, we will all be just fine.

And while were here in the third dimension, I just wanna mention that i'm the best you got in terms of rhythm and rhyme

But since i'm here and I got time just listen to my flow that will make you feel fine

and I rap so fast that lightning sparks off my lips

So before you try to keep up you should grab a brisk

And the people around me say i can't rap but the truth i spit is something i never miss that's why they cry when they hear my diss

So why your heads in space floating with the moon rocks ima be here rapping with Monoxide and Madrox

so don't try to copy my flows that are entirely mine and soon my potential will enter maximum overdrive

Wait what your still here guess I have to continue with some overtime

So let's start with something you don't know

OK when i start to flow i don't blow it
My fathers influence is what started it
And doing this for him is what moves it
And me not being a failure and doing it
Is what proves it
And that's it for the bit with all the it’s and for me I can't pretend that it's not the end
Jesus may be the prince of the kin but with all my might you should call me the prince in lights

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Welcome to the show, let the madness begin

I'm the Mad Jester, here to make you grin

Lose yourself in the chaos, let the laughter flow

Sit back, relax, and enjoy the show

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(middle verse)

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Step right up and gather near

The Mad Jester's here, have no fear

With jokes and tricks that'll make you cheer

Welcome to the show, let's make it clear

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Try as I might, my sanity is failing me

And My mind is twiztid with the rap that i'm spittin

When it comes to talent there's no use in quittin

Even if im the spitting image of a mad man

My brain rotting in the trash can

My vision blurry like i got slapped by the sandman

But even now as my mind fades i hear the cheers of the souls that wait

They want me to go faster

I'm not done you know i can do better

so
I shoulda coulda woulda done better in the first place
But instead i went at my own pace
You all want me to stop while i'm ahead
But i sped up instead
I fed on the chaos as it bled
I refuse to worry about your problems i will lay in my own bed
And I feel the poison enter my system if i keep going i might end up dead
But I refuse until the proper conditions are met.
And i know i'm awesome as a awesome possum
So don't cause a problem
Your getting conspiratory
That's shane dawsome’s territory
And i don't even care that i got the name wrong
I'm just chillin in my thong playing ping pong
Gaining muscle tell i look like king kong
But before long I will start my world tour
I hear them asking for more
So no matter what comes in store
Just open the door
What are you crying for
You know fun is the only cure
So Just let your thoughts stir
And your heart purr
And with time if you act in kind
Everything will be just fine.

Like my love for my family im sharing through this beat in the rhyme

7971175

I'm just chillin in my thong playing ping pong

The lyrics was aight but this is just questionable 😭

On a real note, idk if you’ve ever written before, but I would recommend checking out a thesaurus (or websites like RhymeZone, which is a really solid one) to find some good words to incorporate. One of the best skills to have as a writer/rapper is a good vocabulary, and the more words you know the better/cleverer your rhymes will be. Saying this as someone who been making music for a few years now.

Hope this advice helps 🙏🏽

7971195
thanks one rap I am working with now goes like this

I'm a demonic psychotic who's not willing to drink the moronic Jesus tonic

what to expand on that rhyme right there

7971195
I made that one line pretty early on so I should probably edit this whole thing at some point.

7971205
I’d prolly have to hear how it sounds on a track to determine what would need to be changed. On paper it looks fine tbh

7971206
Solid, keep working brodie 🙏🏽

7971208
the one line you mentioned I am pretty sure was to be funny or somthing

7971210
I figured. I think there’s much better ways to do that though.

7971218
most likely still starting out will get better