Ending – Sam
Unlock Condition: Place the tiles in a specific order in the final hallway, then go through the final door.
“I don’t know, this doesn’t seem right.” She said as she looked around at the plates. She had put the fish in the first box, the bird in the second, the cat in the third and the snake in the fourth. Nothing had happened when she placed each of the plates, but something compelled her, told her that this was what she was supposed to do.
“I guess…the only thing left is to go through that door then.” She said turning to face the wooden door at the end of the hallway. The Slender Pony had gone through the door before, so she knew it had to be waiting for her on the other side.
She walked up to the door carefully. She took a deep breath as she prepared for what was on the other side. She put her hoof up to the handle and pushed the door open.
“You’ve got a typo here. It says ‘Her voice was running out of patients.’ You spelled ‘patience’ as ‘patients’. I guess she had sick people in her throat.” A green pony dressed up in a ninja suit with a green mane joked as he read what was written before her.
“Oh! Oops!” A brown pony with a messy brown mane said switching his attention from the screen he had been working on, rolling his chair over to the green pony. “Thank you for catching that Brad.” The brown pony said as he quickly moved his mouse over the words and changed the typo.
“Not a problem, it’s why you hired me to be a proof reader.” Brad chuckled as he went back to reading. “So where are you in the current chapter?”
“Well, I was about to having her go through the door to meet her final encounter with Slender Mane-“ the brown pony’s words were interrupted by the sound of a door opening behind them. The two pony’s turned around to look at the door.
“H-Huh?” Pinkie said as she looked at the two pony’s sitting before the giant machine that was littered with screens. “Where am I?” She asked looking confused.
“…Is that Pinkie Pie?” Brad asked confused.
“I…think it is.” The brown pony said baffled.
“Hey, where is this place?” Pinkie asked walking in further to the room, closing the door behind her. “And why are you guys here?” Pinkie stopped in her tracks, “Wait, you’re not crazy and going to try and kill me are you?”
“…Uh Sam, she somehow broke out of the story.” Brad said pointing to his brown companion.
“…Well this is…unexpected. I didn’t think Pinkie Pie could actually do that.” Sam said scratching his head.
“What’s going on here? How come you guys know my name? And what story?” Pinkie asked even more confused as she looked back and forth between the two ponies.
“…Well, I guess as long as you are on this side of the fourth wall you deserve an explanation.” Sam said shifting his hooves a little uncomfortably, not sure how she’ll react to the news that everything that had been happening to her in the town was his work.
“…Though this does present the perfect opportunity to write in the top-hat and cane dancing Pyramid Head.” Brad joked.
-The End?-
Think you might have forgotten to publish chapter 10.
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no, I made a mistake with it. All the chapters are there, just for some reason (probably due to the site being in beta) chapter 10 was skipped, but Chapter 11 IS chapter 10.
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Oh right, you mean because you accidently named it wrong and I haven't added the ability to rename chapters yet :P My apologies.
Lol I love the Sam ending. And I was freaked out with the ending where evil pinkie pie came into the real world.
By any chance, could you write another? i need my fill of silent hill because of you but your a good writer so i forgive you also, ive read the second one about Fluttershy and i thought it was frickin amazing! but now we need one about apple Jack, or Rarity.
I enjoyed this story, it had an interesting concept given that the otherworld was actually Pinkie Pie's dementia, but I can't comment on how similar it was to the first Silent Hill game since I haven't had the pleasure of playing it yet. My only critique would be that there were too many repeated words and in some places, poor sentence structure. It also felt in some parts too much like a game rather than an actual story, which, while very much like pinkie pie does take away from of the tale's atmosphere. I'll be sure to read the second one with fluttershy too
GOD I CRIED SO MANY TEARS THROUGHOUT THIS STORY... I HAD TO ACTUALLY STOP READING WHEN THEY WENT TO HER GRAVE I CRIED SO MUCH.
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I remember playing all the Silent Hill games... just... they never had this impact on me. This is entirely different... [god I'm crying again.]
I salute you sir!
I cried a lot, but I enjoyed it... Thank you. [I'm back to tears again :(]
well.... THAT WAS ..... no wors for how great was. i loved it
esspically the second pinkie pie and stanger danger twist
If, by any accident you're polish, check this translation of Silent Ponyville.
http://mylittlebrony.blogspot.com/2011/10/fanfic-silent-ponyville.html
PINKIE! The fourth wall is sensitive! You can't just waltz on into the real world like that, it's baaaaad! Very bad!
Anywho, I love your story. Although Octavia being Pinkie's sister was a bit... random...I think it just adds to your story's flair. You thought of it first, so this is your idea and your fanon that goes with it!
*manly tears*I would have killed the Slenderpony/Slendermane myself if I could have. If I ever get my hands on the colt I'll...I'll...*shattering glass* heheheh!
And now, I sign off!
Godspeed you magnificent bastard-BlazingShadowBrony
I finally got around reading this. I just finished the first chapter, and OMG, it's even better than I could ever imagine.
May I ask a question, just to be sure? ; The dream Pinkie has about her and Rainbow Dash,
is that a reference to Cupcakes?
I'm so glad I finally have the time to read this. This deserves alot more views.
Oh and, you must feel so proud that this is being made into a game! I can't wait for it!
I have been playing SH ever since I was a little girl, and ponies are my life. This has got to be the best combo ever!
Now if you'll excuse me, I'll go read the next chapter right away!
Hmm... This was... Interesting
I may try to make a flash game out of this if I have free time
This was pure amazing.
Whenever at the end when Pinkie realized Slendermane was the colt, and that everything was inside her head, I was like "DUDHCYIDBGUVFIDSBGDV'
5/5
pf-ft blazingshadow i go through the fourth wall all the time..........and thats why i created the doctor to clean up my mess......and i usually accedintaly make 1 sentint life form go insane every time i cross....i should probably stop going through it........either way i love this chapter hahaha she broke the fourth wall
Ah! I wish i could help in the game making. But, Alas. The only thing im good for is talking. Oh it`d be fun to voice a character. But my voice is to deep to be anyone`s... And also id be Shy and shaky reading the scripts
I really like these, they give depth to the characters and make them more... real (for lack of a better term)
Anyway good job jake, looking forward to the next chapter in story 3
I am glad I took the time to read this, it was amazing.
Wait... Top hat and cane dancing Pyramid Head? That is so win!
Glad to see my first not-cupcake story here. Still one of my absolute favorites because THIS is how you do a crossover right. I mean the concepts of Silent Hill are there, but it still has an original twist to them. And obviously, major points have been earned for no gratuitous Pyramid Head appearance (Save for the joke ending, but that's what they're for.) All my stars belong to this (and Fallout: Equestria, and On a Cross and Arrow, and Past Sins.)
I don't even like grim-dark, but wow, this is one of the best fictions of all time. You, my good sir, are brilliant, although I'm a little afraid to read Silent Ponyville 2.
It's very rare for a story to actually scare me, but you managed to pull it off. When I first caught eye of this story I was literally bouncing up and down just to read it. I mean- I'm a biiiig silent hill fan. I'm also a big fan of Pinkie Pie, so it was just exciting to see something like this.
*reads first comment* yea ok... 10th chapter... WAIT! *reads name then scrolls down to bottom of page
*bows down*
Kk now that i got that out of me, it was a great story. I cant wait to read the next one. I saw the second one on the featured list, so i decided to read the first one first. Im glad i did. I liked all the extra endings you put in there i remember how disturbing the movie was, and this had me thinking about it the whole time. Five stars for you. (god im horrible at writing. My sentences just are horrible, and even tho this barely influences my sentence structure, it doesnt help that im typing on my ipod)
Also, i rated 5 stars, but it went from 4.8 to 4.7... Like what? I dont even....
LOL that ending was mighty epic xD
Amazing! Sent chills down my spine.
Wow.... I remember playing all of the Silent Hill games, but never did they have this effect on me... This is easily one of the best fanfictions I've ever read. You, sir, are brilliant. I can't wait to read Silent Ponyville 2
Well...I know that Pinkie Pie is known for her fourth wall jokes. But this is ridiculous!
Well! I already read the story, so have my thumbs and a favorite. Good to see this on here.
All in all, it was a fantastic story. I love giving the reader a choice of the multiple endings. It's something that I do myself as well.
MULTIPLE ENDINGS GIVE ME MINDFUCK! Still, one of the best stories of all time. Favoriting.
who is pyramid head?
wheres the game
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Is it a bad thing that I didn't cry once? Then again, I didn't cry reading cupcakes, and I didn't find it as disturbing as the 2009 Film Anti-Christ, so I suppose I just have a higher tolerance.
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Wait, WHAT!!? LINKIE LINKIE LINKIE LINKIE
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There needs to be a flash of Pinkie dancing with one. There really needs to be one.
Over all, an excellent story. While I was not freaked out or crying by anything, I must say I was hanging by my claw and paw the entire way through. The way you introduced cupcakes into this actually makes cupcakes make a hell of a lot of sense, which is saying something. My only thing now is to wonder the following-Were any of the monsters actually taken from the game itself? Were any of the puzzles themselves copied or modified, or were they original? And finally...if I read this while listening to the Silent Hill SoundTrack, will it become 50% cooler?
HA HA!!
"Faceless slender pony?" Nice Slender Man reference.
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Jake's got quite the extensive list of Silent Ponyville works completed so far. Not to mention all of the other fan-stories that have sprung out off of his. They'll all get here eventually though. Count on it.
Intrude alert! Pinkie Pie has breached the fourth wall SHE MUST BE STOPPED!
I listned to the Silent hill siren ever time it went on.
Ugh. First My Little Dashie and now this. My views on the ponies are slowly changing to very odd, depressing things.
Refference to SH2s Dog Ending. That alonee warrants a thumbs up.
This is the only story i have read that scares me. Good on ya mate
As a fan of the Silent Hill games and MLP, I definitely approve of this story! I really enjoyed the way you combined the first game, along with elements of the second one, and even a dash of things here and there. Slender Mane, hello! That was an awesome addition! OwO Oh God, and you added the "Cupcakes" universe to it... That was just unsettling. But it worked for the story!
The endings were really nicely done, so were the funny ones! I enjoyed those. XD
So in all, this was very well done! You captured the essences of Silent Hill, with a pony twist, and even put your own spin on things. It was all very creative! I enjoyed it all! I especially look forward to the future instalments! Well done!
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The first one is a fanart of the white filly. The second is a fan-based idea for a Silent Ponyville monster, but isn't an actual canon monster heh.
626129 Azekahh but yeah dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra.png
356293 WHAT?!?! YOU'RE READING THIS AND DONT EVEN KNOW WHO PYRAMID HEAD IS?!?! OMG!!!!!
PYRAMID HEAD IS A CHARACTER WHO FIRST APPEARS IN SILENT HILL 2! HE HAS A HUUUGE SWORD TO KILL WITH! AND PYRAMID HEAD RAPES OTHER MONSTERS!!!
i liked the story very much my freind got me into this story and i must say its awsime ^_^
Have no time right now, but I'll read it once finals are done.
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I first saw this on DeviantArt
And I have to say, It is a really darn good story.
I read both 1 & 2 and they were really good
I don't know how to deal this this
Never played Silent Hil...
I want to now.
It sounds kinda like Alan Wake. Or, to be more accurate, Alan Wake sounds like Silent Hill.
Loved the Cupcakes mythology weaved in there, my face was pretty much stuck in mode at the end of that ending...
Altogether an awesomely creepy and well-written story! The Bellamina thing makes me though...
So, I think I'll say...
Journcy Out.
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(*Normal ending = .)