What happens if Rainbow Dash didn't try to stop Mare-Do-Well? What happens is a long journey to find her, with lots of twists and turns. Starts off like in the episode, but takes a quick turn. Written in the context after the fall of Chrysalis and during the Mare-Do-Well episode.
very good so far, ill keep a eye on this story. good job
i like it try out more things than going and then and then and then otherwise im looking forward to the rest of this
2743882 sorry about that bro. I'll fix that for the next chapter. Ina put it up in a couple of hours anyway, so I'll check up on that. Thanks for that notification. :)
it turned out alot better but why flutter dash shipping fluttershy is the worst
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Why not.
I don't understand why people write fanfics where the main characters are in love with eachother.
Either way, good start, keep going