• Member Since 22nd Jan, 2013
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Darkstar195


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When Queen Chrysalis was defeated, she was repelled fairly easily by Shining Armor's shield. Knowing this, everypony involved dropped their guard and went back to their lives.
But did anyone find it suspicious that a changeling that had just defeated Celestia in single combat would be defeated so easily by the very thing they eat- love?
Of course not... after all, the power of love solves everything, right?
Right?

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 4 )

Premise is great. Could be longer.

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Yeah, I know. I'm not the greatest at writing long stories. :derpytongue2:

Decent idea, but the execution is rushed. Things go by too fast to be fully developed.

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