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carnivale


mostly insane.

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This story is a sequel to My Little Pony: Foalsitting Your Friends is Magic


Another surprising event has occurred revolving around Twilight's cold - this time managing to turn the ponies into dragons and the dragon into a pony! What type of disasters will happen this time?

Only one way to find out!

(I advise reading the prequel first, as it will make a lot more sense)

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 116 )

I am going to ask for another sequel because they are still dragons! :pinkiegasp: I know this has a random tag but that is no ending to a story mister!

I'm going to read this later and comment agan when I read it but for now I would like to say that this Idea for a story is brilliant (I mean it caught my eye) and it seems it could have had WAAAAAAY more chapters (and more shananagins(I don't know if I spelt that last word right))

You have a constant problem with diction, and using words in bizarre and incorrect ways, specifically whenever you try to reach for a big word in describing something. You'd do better to keep your word usage simple and not distract from your narrative, which is progressing nicely.

Wait... Did my suggestion help at all :D?
Or did someone else beat me to the punch and I didn't realize it D:?

This literally demanded a sequel!

>>>“Hmmm, well, that’s a toughie! Puff the Magic Dragon is the only song I know about dragons, but I know tons of songs about cupcakes! Ooh, wanna hear one of them?” >>>

"It involves me and Dashie and my basement and a bunch of surgical equipment!" continued Pinkie ecstatically.

Rarity suddenly felt a sense of distinctly chilling unease. "Do not want," she replied blankly. :duck:

:trollestia:

Oh dear god that was AWESOME!

Nice job on the feature! This is worthy of it!

~Skeeter The Lurker

it's a good story but your AJ is a bit off.

2848286 Thank you so much! I was afraid it wouldn't get as much love as the prequel, however. :twilightsheepish:

2846454 2847681 Maybe I'll add another chapter. How does that sound? :derpytongue2:

2848658

Wait... There was a prequel to this?

AND I MISSED IT? You, good sir, must provide me a link post haste!

~Skeeter The Lurker

2848678 The link is in the summary of this story. Just click on the green text.

2848533 Yes, I seem to struggle a lot with her. :applejackunsure:

Congrats on the feature again. I read this around fourteen hours ago, but didn't feel like commenting at the time.
Perv box? I'll have to use that on my friends now :rainbowlaugh:
Another awesome story from an awesome author. Cliffhanger ending begs for a sequel, though, and so does your audience :pinkiehappy: Just one more. End it without a cliffhanger and we won't ask again.

2848671 If you're making another chapter. Maybe try using making them greedy (imagines 6 giant dragons rampaging around Ponyville):trollestia:

Or how about making the CMC dragons too?

TGM

If I don't get a 'Fus Ro Yay!' out of Flutterdragon in this story I am going to be fairly upset.

2848810 Thank you so much. I seem I have troubles with endings. :applejackconfused: but I am likely to put up another chapter; not necessarily a sequel. Hopefully I can get it done in the meantime. :twilightsmile:

2849064 I was actually thinking about adding that in! :pinkiegasp: Are you psychic?

Please put a fus ro yay in their Carnivale, I dont want to see what happens when GenuineMaelstrom gets angry

This has got to be more than a one-shot. This is too good not to be more than a one-shot.

Occidental means European.

i.imgur.com/t2ePU.png
the pic says it all :pinkiehappy:

i eagerly await any future updates (if they come to pass) :twilightsmile:

Really good story telling. Liked the other one as well. Are you going to finish the story, or just leave it like it is? Either way, it is a fun story.

Well, this seems adorable. Read time!

2850154 Nope, going to finish it. Thank you very much.

2849915 Thanks! :pinkiehappy: Working on the next (possibly last) chapter.

2 haters so far! 99 lovers right now! I am one of the tumbs up people!

Love the chapter name "Subito, Dracones".... which is latin for "Suddenly Dragon".... right?:twistnerd:

The cover pic has always been my Avatar.

Good to hear there's still more of this! That cover pic is cute. It dragged me to read this story and boy was I glad I did.

2851118 Thank you so much. I thank everyone for the support and positive feedback. :heart:

bulls on parade

thanks now i got that song stuck in my head

2849820

Technically it applies to the entire Western world at this point. Not just Europe. But considering Europe WAS the Western world at that point, yes - at its creation it was just Europe.

This looks very interesting. :ajsmug:

2851551

Well, what I'm getting at is whether the chapter title is correct or not. Depends if it's supposed to mean "Accidental Dragon" or "Western Dragon."

may read it when it is finished. i mostly read finished fanfics

2851551>>2851692 I changed the chapter title. Someone else pointed it out to me and suggested the new title. I'm sorry. I didn't realize it meant that.

2851840

Hey, no need to apologize to me, I only saw Subito, dracones anyway. I was just correcting the other guy.

Wow, this is just awesome.

I am, I am laughing and enjoying this chapter. This cheered me up and... oh dear. The CMC are... and Spike and, okay I really look forward to chapter two when it comes out. Good luck and have fun writing you got a follower of these stories.

You know the saying; A picture equals a thousand words
In this case, a picture equals more than one chapter :yay:

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