Thanks to the love bomb at the Royal Wedding, Princess Celestia is revealed to be a Changeling Queen. How will Equestria, deal with this? And why is Celestia a Changeling Queen in the first place?
After the events of Project: Sunflower, Erin returns to Ponyville to study magic. Meanwhile, something is stirring on the newly-discovered world of Harmony.
The mane six travel to a ski lodge for Twilight's birthday, but ponies soon start disappearing. As the blizzard rages outside, she must discover who, or what, is behind it all.
Augh, that ending was a real letdown. Worst birthday party ever. :| Seriously, if I was Twilight, I'd hate them all forever.
That said, this was a pretty enjoyable read and I think it would benefit from being rewritten as a long-form chaptered fic to keep up the suspense and atmosphere. I just... I wish that had been a real monster, seriously. That was horrible, what they did.
267395 Thanks for the feedback! And I agree, I ended up being unsatisfied with the ending, but I ran out of time and had to submit it as it was. The pacing was also too fast, but I learned a lot from trying to make a story in one weekend. You can expect a major rewrite soon.
Augh, that ending was a real letdown. Worst birthday party ever. :| Seriously, if I was Twilight, I'd hate them all forever.
That said, this was a pretty enjoyable read and I think it would benefit from being rewritten as a long-form chaptered fic to keep up the suspense and atmosphere. I just... I wish that had been a real monster, seriously. That was horrible, what they did.
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Thanks for the feedback! And I agree, I ended up being unsatisfied with the ending, but I ran out of time and had to submit it as it was. The pacing was also too fast, but I learned a lot from trying to make a story in one weekend. You can expect a major rewrite soon.
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Best news I've heard all day. :)
I enjoyed what's here, and I hope to see it continue/conclude!