Pinkie gets Twilight to help fix the 4th wall. Then Pinkie gets hungry.
Thanks to user No One and Nobody for edits and advice
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Well that was random. Might want to double check your work or get a proofreader, but I thought it was pretty funny for a first fic. Keep up the good work.
3188698 thanks for the comment! and yeah I know there was still some problems in there I did not catch but wanted to publish it before I decided It was not worth posting.
3188698
I agree with him 100%
You forgot to capitalize "Pinkie" a few times but other then that it was great!
3188721 Thanks! should be fixed now.
A couple spelling errors but we all have them. all around a great story
I LOVE RANDOMNESS!
Do you like trollfics? I've done a couple of them in the past few days, and let me tell you...
I like your Pinkie Pie story a lot more than the insanely random one I did. Pinkie Pie EATING the fourth wall is just pure genius. I never would have thought of that.
Liked and Commented. Now I guess I just follow you now.
I have no idea what I just read, but I like it.
Alright I'm just gonna get down to reading this lol.
Well the beginning has a scream and an explosion.
Someone must've just had a hard orgasmLolol dat monthly repair budget. I'd buy a door for Twily any day. ;)
Loldafuq. It would be nice if I could jump into the fourth wall like that. :S Wait, dark white? WHAT IS THAT COLOR DAFUQ
Ooooh Twilight gonna be becoming insane soon. I can already feel it.
"Pinkie walked twilight a few infinities to the left"
"a few infinities"
wat
Lol. Of course Twilight can fix anything. Right? She can fix anything... everything and anything.. Mmm... I think I'll respect Twilight more now. xD
Also OOC but my fan in my room isn't on, yet in the corner of my eye I can see it move. .-. dafuq bro
"Gilded Lockheart." I know this is a reference. It has to be. I just don get it :A
YES APPLEJACK IS IN THIS FANFIC. +1 FOR STRONGEST AND SMEZZIEST PONY EVER. *Cue angry Rainbow Dash fans*
"After a few seconds to the ball of nothing, hanging on nothing, dropped to the floor of nothing leaving an unblemished wall of nothing." SO MUCH NOTHING I CAN'T TAKE IT ANYMORE
Lolohgod Pinkie gonna eat it. EAT IT PINKIE EAT IT SO HARD WHILE I STARE INTENTLY AT YOU.
Rofl Chicken and Fritos. Shame I don't even know what a Frito is. :L lol
Lols. I would've wanted to remember the 4th wall though. Imagine all the things I would be able to do..
Oh and you forgot to mention the part where a black hole erupts inside Pinkie only mere minutes after she comes back into reality, sucking up all of Equestria and everything in it.
Except for Lyra Heartstrings lololol+1 for effort, if you know what I mean. XD
Liked, faved, read, then unmarked the "read" button so I can come back to this.
Edit: Also, you seriously need to fix the grammar errors in this. Once that's done, I think I should be able to say "inb4 featured."
What? It's infinitely better than that M/M foalcon clopfic that's been in the box for the past few days.
3188758 Yeah, I'm bad at spelling. Like really, really bad. In the first draft of this I misspelled Pinkie every other time. I think I once called her ponki
I'll look over the fic and try to find them
3188874 Trollfics? IDK maybe? I'm sure I've enjoyed a trollfic in my time. I'm glad you liked my Pinkie and yeah I've been wanting write this ever since I thought of it.
The original Idea was to have Pinkie brake the universe so all the parallel worlds conversed and basically have a world of every crossover ever. But that seemed like more work than I was willing to put forth.
Also I don't know if/when I'll make write another fic just a fare warning. I do appreciate it tho.
3188923 Glad you liked it
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http://harrypotter.wikia.com/wiki/Gilderoy_Lockhart Also the mind wipe spells were kind of a reverence to the same book.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Frito Its a fried corn chip snack product. Tastes salty and crunchy.
This was fun to read thanks!
3189313 Thanks for the comment! I'll keep an eye out for the grammar errors. Also I would be SHOCKED if I got featured.
Changed a few words and fixed a few grammar errors. There probably are some spelling mistakes I did not catch still in there however.
Your pinkie story was great I liked and favorited it you should stick with random writing. My friend gamerkirby99 is a great editor I gonna have him fix my stories when Iam ready to get them on the site.
3193594 aww, thanks
I will probably write some more once I think of something this was pretty fun after all.
Remember this through failer we have greatness
"Gilded Lockheart" I smell a Harry Potter reference here. You'd make J.K. Rowling proud, including a character from her famous book series in here.
Why do I get the feeling I don't even want to know how Pinkie damaged the 4th wall in the first place?
Poor Spike.
""-missing
Can-also missing
Fun!
Did pink bite the 4th wall or lick it?
6240617 Fixed.
She just picked up the ball that Twilight made and put it in her mouth.
I would love to see a sequel with the title being something along the lines of "Pinkie Rips the Fabric of Reality and Gets Rarity to Fix it".
Alright, first of all I didn't not like it. It was rather disappointing, but there was something of a story here.
There were many grammatical issues that made it slightly harder to read, and the characters seemed more like they were reading a script than actually interacting with the moment.
I was half expecting Pinkie to say something like.
With a little improvement though this story could actually be much better and actually quite enjoyable.
6879081 crazy late reply. My original plan for a sequel was a AJ x PP ship fic using this video for inspiration.
there's a story in there somewhere
Well, that was random.