For everypony in the land, life in Equestria is very peaceful, especially during summer vacation.
That is until...
...They showed up, completely out of nowhere.
A guy and a girl, who has power over some strange cards...
This is my very first fanfic, leave me some feedback and let me know what you guys think or if there's something I need to improve on.
I do not claim any rights to the following:
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Persona 4
These belong to their respective owners. This is just for entertainment purposes.
Seems interesting i'll follow to see where this goes.
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Decided to add an "Alternate Universe" tag
Pretty good. It does feel a tad rushed but what I'm enjoying is you employ a level up and arcana system similar to the game and use your story to level up the characters. i'll most likely finish the other chapters you've got soon and i cannot wait to see what you bring out next.
He isn't in the TV World so shouldn't it be more like: vignette4.wikia.nocookie.net/megamitensei/images/5/57/EvokerGame.gif/revision/latest?cb=20150919121158
Not mean to offend but its really bs that Celestia is able to order Luna around like that.
Like they are co-rulers, Celestia shouldn't be "outranking" Luna like that.
Will this continue?
I don't know much about Persona but this also caught my eye.
Will Spike get a persona too?
It really bothers me that Luna was forced to apologize.
Celestia shouldn't be able to order Luna around like that.