Chapter 1
Unrequited Lust
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It wasn’t voyeurism, not really.
There was just nowhere else to look, that’s all.
She couldn’t wipe Applejack’s forehead very well if she looked the other way. She wasn’t staring or perving; she was just doing her job right.
Rarity huffed and blew a strand of hair out of her face.
It didn’t help that the earth pony was being so suggestive with every movement. Every time she leaned forward to fill a crack in the dam wall, her flank would rise and stick out slightly, drawing Rarity’s eyes like bees to honey. Not only was it unladylike, it was horribly unfair.
And worst of all, she didn’t even seem to notice! That darn farmpony would sit back down on the thick wooden plank and toss Rarity a grateful smile when the cloth gently dabbed away the perspiration. She would attempt to return the smile, though she knew hers was slightly pained in execution.
“Thanks for helpin’ me with this, Rare. Mighty generous of ya,” drawled the orange pony as she placed the trowel down for a moment.
“Oh, nonsense dear. You heard Twilight; we all must do our part to make Equestria safer.” Generous? What was truly generous was Applejack providing so many memorable mental images for the white unicorn.
“Still, ya could’ve chosen one of the cushy jobs but instead yer helpin’ me. I’m grateful, is all I’m sayin’.”
Rarity gave a short laugh. “This isn’t exactly strenuous work, darling. But… it’s my pleasure.” They shared a smile, but their thoughts couldn’t have been more different.
Applejack turned back and tugged on the rope, signalling the ponies controlling their descent that they were finished in that section. Slowly, the pair were lowered slightly further down the dam wall until they reached another crack. A second tug brought them to a halt, and the torture began anew.
The earth pony leaned forward to run a hoof along the split. “Hoo-whee! Look at the size of this one, Rare!”
“Yes… it’s quite the crack alright,” Rarity said quietly, her eyes nowhere near the damaged wall. “Very firm.”
Snorting, Applejack sat back down to retrieve the trowel. “Well it is made of concrete, ya silly pony.” She scooped up more of the mixture and leaned forward once more. A few moments passed before she looked back over her shoulder. “Uh, Rare? Ain’t you forgetting something?”
Snapping out of the delightful images in her head (and before her eyes), Rarity quickly levitated the cloth over to her friend and smoothly wiped her sweaty face. “Better?”
“Much.” She returned to her work.
An idea sparked to life in the fashionista’s mind. “Oh my, Applejack, you’re sweaty all over! I simply cannot let that be. Do you have any idea what dried sweat does to your fur?”
“Uh, no?” was the grunted reply.
“Awful things, darling, simply awful. Just thinking of those things happening to your beautiful fur makes me feel faint! You must let me clean you up. I insist.”
“Sure, I ‘spose. Do you want me to sit back?”
“No, no, no, that’s fine. You can keep working while I do it.”
With hungry eyes, Rarity slid closer to her friend. The cloth dropped out of the air and onto her left hoof. There was no way she would pass up an opportunity to touch that annoyingly attractive mare with her bare hooves.
Reaching out shakily, her covered hoof touched the back of Applejack’s neck. To her surprise, the farmpony sighed in enjoyment.
“Applejack?”
“Sorry ‘bout that. My neck’s been killin’ me this whole time.” After a pause, she cocked her head blindly towards the hoof. “Once you’ve got the sweat off, uh, could you maybe…”
Rarity almost squealed in excitement. “Do you want me to massage you?”
“Well, uh, if it’s not a hassle…”
“Nonsense! I’d be happy to! It’s the least I can do, considering you’re doing all the work here.”
“Thanks, Rare.” After that, she returned to the task at hand, slowly filling the big crack with the grey sludge and smoothing down the edges. Only when she felt a hoof sliding down her back did she remember who was with her.
With her cloth-covered hoof only a few centimetres above Applejack’s flank, Rarity was having trouble containing her excitement. Fear was the only thing that kept her from going further.
That was, until Applejack noticed she had paused. “Somethin’ wrong, sugarcube?”
“No, nothing.” The lie was evident in her voice, so she quickly corrected herself. “Well, just a little problem.”
“Yeah?”
“It’s just…” Another golden opportunity sprang to mind. “Your flank is quite sweaty too, and I was wondering how you might react should I start touching that area.”
Her blonde mane flicked when she snorted. “You’ve touched my flank plenty of times. We all shove each other out the way a fair bit. I don’t mind if you want to save my rear fur from the horrors of sweat.”
The farmer’s tone might have been slightly more concerned if she had seen the little smile upon Rarity’s lips. Her hoof went a-travelling downwards, sliding over the rear and revealing so much more than sight alone was able to. It was firm, just like she expected, but it was warmer than anticipated. Even through the cloth, heat radiated off the earth pony.
She swallowed back a mouthful of saliva so it wouldn’t drool out and quickly searched for something to say to break the one-sided tension. “You are… certainly a well-built pony, Applejack.”
“That’s a good thing, right?”
“Oh, yes,” the unicorn purred, “Very good.”
“Well thanks then.” The orange pony remained as oblivious as ever.
Rarity found herself leaning closer as she slowly moved her hoof in little circles over Applejack’s right flank. It was the ultimate tease, even worse than looking without touching! A low groan of frustration escaped her lips.
“You okay, Rare?”
The accented voice startled her and she quickly removed her hoof. “Yes, I’m fine. I’m also finished back here. Would you still like a massage?”
Applejack sat back and placed the trowel down, cracking her neck with an audible pop. “Ouch… You bet I do.”
“Just hold still and let your pain melt away, darling,” cooed Rarity as she shuffled closer to sit behind her friend. The bucket was discretely floated around to occupy her previous position, leaving no barriers between the huntress and her prey. Or more accurately, the pervert and her unwitting target.
Rarity quickly dispelled the thought. It was not voyeurism. Now it was just… helping out a friend. There was nothing perverted about that.
She shuddered slightly as her hooves contacted Applejack’s shoulders and began to work. Alright, maybe it was a little perverted, but that’s natural. Besides, wasn’t everypony always telling her to loosen up?
“Oh, you got some magic hooves right there,” muttered the earth pony, closing her eyes to reinforce the other senses.
Slowly, rubbing her hooves in small, pressured circles, Rarity felt the taut muscles around her friend’s neck begin to soften and relax. She smiled with satisfaction. Clearly, her skills had not dulled in the slightest, despite not having any recent opportunities to practice.
“Would you like me to do anything in particular?” the fashionista whispered into the orange ears in front of her, half folded over as they too relaxed.
“Y’all can do whatever you want as long as it feels this good…” Applejack mumbled in reply, clearly distracted.
Rarity giggled. “You should be careful saying things like that. Somepony might take it the wrong way.” Oh, how she would love to take her the wrong way!
The prey’s eyes drifted half-open. “I don’t follow.”
“Shh, just relax and forget about it darling.”
She did just that, sinking back into the dark world behind her eyelids with a content sigh.
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The line of ponies on top of the dam were completely silent so as not to disturb the wondrous display below. Worker stallions wearing yellow hardhats, weather team pegasus ponies with their wings still ruffled from flight, and illustrious-looking unicorns were all brought together by the extremely visible antics of the local fashionista and apple farmer.
At the centre, directly above them, three particular friends stood.
The pink one wore an ear-to-ear grin as she looked downwards.
The yellow one had flushed cheeks and wide eyes as she did the same.
Finally, the cyan one simply smirked and watched, determined not to do anything that would break the moment.
A small dragon jogged ahead of an approaching purple unicorn, desperate to see what the fuss was about. Upon looking over the edge, his jaw dropped. “Do they know we can s-URGH!” He was cut off suddenly by three different coloured hooves in his mouth.
“Spike, shut up,” ordered Rainbow Dash, her smirk not flickering for a moment and her eyes remaining locked.
Twilight approached, floating a checklist beside her head. “Hello everypony! What’s going- OH MY-“
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Dear Princess Celestia,
This town is full of voyeurs. Can I come back to Canterlot? Please?
Your Frightened Student,
Twilight Sparkle
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My Faithful Student Twilight,
I take it you haven’t heard the nickname they’ve given me?
You are welcome to return to Canterlot.
I’ll be waiting.
Your Mentor,
Princess Celestia
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A/N: You thought you were getting a clopfic, didn't you? I am DawnFade, killer of boners! Fear my wrath!
Oh, and leave a comment if you liked the story. It was originally going to be a clopfic but I decided it was a bit unrealistic getting busy while suspended halfway down a featureless grey wall in plain sight for miles. So instead I went for the humourous ending.
Let me know what you think!
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Lol, loved it! Did you get my pm? Im sorry i havent gotten around to preteading yet, i had finals this week and right now im on a bus to Band Festival. Go band geeks! So, sorry i havent been able to pretead and correct mistakes and such.
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This is extra super amazing because this is how I got my first girl in bed. If you got the touch, you got the powah!
That was pretty funny, DawnFade. I think it's better this way. But, you could always write another chapter as to what happened if you feel like doing so. Honestly, I'm a bit curious as to how it would go.
Well done!
lol dat ending. Good work ol chap
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That's fine, real life comes first!
I haven't received a PM from you recently, no.
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The ending had me in laughing like a mad man. Well played
It was fun to read, though you could have done SO MUCH MORE with it, and I'm not even talking about the more mature stuff
FUCK TWILIGHT !
FUCK !
YOU RUINED IT !
Damn that was a good Rarijack story.
Oh Rarity, you silly pony.
This was hilarious and letting our minds fill in the blanks as to what the two were doing was perfect.
You know, I've waited for that fic to come. And you don't disappoint! Who cares clopfic or not? it's shipping, it's Rarijack and it's hilarious!
Lol! Lol! Lol, Lol!
You, my friend, can have my mustache. I approve a thousand times over. I can't give you more than a track, star, and a thumb so you get that.
P.S. my exclamation point had to go with something
You tricky pony you.....
Almost ROFL.
If not for this chair having arms, I would have.
Are you serius? Is fimfiction.net trying to get me drowned in unread chapters and fics this is #80 of tracked fics!
X-COM Commander Kim Fareseed over and out.
Nice job breaking it, Twi. And overreacting.
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It could be a start of a beautiful relationship.
Regardless if it's clopfic or not, 
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is my favorite shipping. And since that scene on the dam I consider it canon. 
I was waiting for a fic to build around it. Nicely done. Have a thumb. 
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BONER-BREAKER!
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After one act of voyagerism Twlight wants to go back to Canterlot and the Princess.
"All according to plan...:
So, just what is Ponyville's unflattering nickname?
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Awwww yeahhh
....How did this get featured??
Ayway, I imagined that Rarity was feeding Applejack one of Pinkie's 'cupcakes'
Very well written
rainbow likes what she sees
I lol'd. And No, I did NOT expect a clopfic, I hate them. (my hatred is justified, I read one this morning and found it horrible and disgusting)
Anyways, great story! I literally couldn't contain my laughter. Keep it up!
This was bucking hilarious.
Your story=All of my love.
You know, it would have been funnier if when Celestia signed her name, It was Princess Molestia.
I hear a evil, creepy laugh when Celestia writes "I’ll be waiting."
You know I *always* love your work, Dawn.
This is no exception.
...but I would love to see a sequel
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Spike's reaction
Dat author's note!
Is Celestia called Princess Voyestia?
I think the image for the story says it all
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Thanks for understanding. Ill see if I can get around to it this weekend lol
Oh, and gratz on the feature man! I told you youre a good writer!
All you ponies should look at my story! It's got everything......and i mean everything
Absolutely hilarious.
To be fair, people have had sex in stranger places. I could get list if you want.
Besides, I'm sure there's someone in the world with a fetish for sex on a piece of wood next to a dam.
Point being, great story! I enjoyed it, and was sad to see it end. Very fun, and dare I say, slightly sexy. Bravo to you.
When I got to the part Where Pinkie was smiling ear to ear
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I clopped my hooves together and TOTALLY busted a gut
No seriously, I clapped my hands, and I picked up my feet, and I clapped them too.
Hah. Pervity is best Rarity.
""He was cut off suddenly by three different coloured hooved in his mouth.""
hooves.
Also Equines do not have "fur" they have hair. "Coat" is an acceptable substitute for "fur" or "pelt".
Also I agree that this wouldn't have worked as a clopfic. Not an explicit one at least. The only way I see it working cloppiness in is if Rarity had built to near orgasm from arousal alone. After the massage AJ notices Rarity's hindquarters are somewhat damp. Thinking this is sweat from the exertion of the massage, AJ remembers what Rarity said about this being bad for the coat and decides to return the favor by wiping her off. The unexpected contact in extremely close proximity to the source of the moisture sends Rarity both figuratively and literally over the edge, forcing AJ to dive after her to save her from drowning. This heroic act would then set the stage for a proper shipping sequel!
...that is if that's something you would consider...
Flat-out lol'd. Well done.
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*****
(Brohoof, starred, tracked, five-starred)
I was already having a good day but reading this made it better
Bow down to the power of Rarijack!
you should totally do an after-story :D :D
Raity: me gusta
It's so funny i am going to die.
Why spamming like button no give you more likes
Epic job keep it up.
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I like it. Make it so!
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The "save a drowning Rarity" is a little too similar to "Swayback Mountain" IMO but that's just how I see it playing out.
You know, I was thinking that exact same thing ("wait a minute, they're on the side of a dam, being held up by several other ponies, shouldn't somebody be noticing about now?")
What Rarity didn't know was that, nearby, the CMC's were waiting with a video camera....
This was splendid! So bawdy, so ribald! Ooh, RIBALDRY!
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You got your first girl in bed while you were both suspended half-way up a featureless cement wall, on a rickety plank, in plain view of everyone?
Where's the youtube video?
Oh lol, I wonder what Applejack'll do when she finds out what everypony was thinking?