Rainbow Dash is injured and running for her life, or maybe, she's running for another reason...
Dramatic reading from TheLostNarrator can be found here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LnP_f5y2pu8
Stories are like onions, they have layers.
Rainbow Dash is injured and running for her life, or maybe, she's running for another reason...
Dramatic reading from TheLostNarrator can be found here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LnP_f5y2pu8
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... I don't get it
Eh, I liked it.
Love it. Make a scootaloo going crazy prequel please.
Such sensory brilliance!
My throat felt funny the whole way through and at one point I even covered my nose to avoid the smell of sewage and blood.
Bravo!
3942573 I agree.
Oh, and a brilliant title.
I looked up it's meaning.
Nice.
The writing itself could be improved, you use too many useless words sometimes ("every nerve ending she had in her body lit up in agony" being the best example) and I think there was one or two grammar issues somewhere in the beginning
But the narration and the pacing are very good, once you get into the story for good, you don't want to leave until the end
Here, have an upvote. You deserved it well.
One of my favourites.
No.
Wow......This was amazing! I'll take a tissue
Wow.
I accidentally ruined the end of the story and the huge shocking reveal by scrolling down too far and letting my eyes wander. But still...
Wow...
great story
but why did scootaloo do it????
i need to know
3942255 i agree.
I've listened to lost's reading of this, but i still don't understand. How exactly is scootaloo her killer? What the heck happened?
But...but.. Why would Scootaloo do this? You have to write a prequel.
As much as Scoots was obsessing over Rainbow Dash. Maybe the obsession went so far into "If I can't have you. No one can have you." levels. Yes I think Scoots finally went into stalker levels of obsession.
That was....
FUCKING AMAZING!
I believe Chant du Cygne is french for Song of the Swan?
WOW! just WOW! I'm speechless here.
The lost narrator has a dramatic reading of this, you can find it by clicking here:
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=LnP_f5y2pu8&list=PLW0W6LstNHThXRbGAabHSzzrmeIslt79s&index=11&t=0s
R.I.P Rainbow Dash
The title reminds me of this song: https://youtu.be/ElJJCAuKslQ
her carapace? is she a changeling? is that why scootaloo fought her?