We should have acted. He’s already here. It was foretold that He would return. His defeat was merely a delay… ‘til the time after Nightmare Moon’s return, after Discord spread chaos across the world. But nopony wanted to believe… believe it could be true. And when the truth finally dawns, it dawns in fire!
But, there is one He fears. In His tongue, he is Dovahkiin… Dragonborn!
I'd like to give a special thanks to infernowyvern for providing the picture.
Let me get this straight.
Spike time travels back to the past to "fix" an impending dragon menace that will shatter Equestria as we know it. He will also be using the Dovah language.
Yep, that's enough. Here, have this.
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Dragonrend may be problematic.
Awesome :3
I was reading the description and at the end I could help thinking to myself FUS DO RAH!
Great work so far, I'll be tracking this.
Dude....Fuck Yeah!
Ive been waiting for this for a while :D, awesome!.
FUS RO DAWESOME
364644 I can't help but agree with you there, sir. Then again, he may be able to use it. Because he has been hit so close to home with the death of Twilight, he may actually have an idea of what it is like to be mortal. He also has a hatred for the one that has done her in, and as such, might be able to pull off using Dragon Rend. If one were to look back into Skyrim, you'll notice that if you were to use Yol, your character does not get hurt by the fire from his or her own shout. Using this principle, it is possible that Spike could very well use Dragon Rend, and survive, because shouts have been seen to be harmless to the one using them. Just my two cents
Well fuck that chapter ending depressed me a bit but very good overall
365028 You make some very good points there. I don't think it would hurt him as much, but I don't think that he would actually be able to gain a true understanding of the Shout itself. After living with Twilight, he probably understands better than another dragon could, but the true essence of mortality? I don't think he would be able to feel that, at the deeper level needed for a Shout. Then again, that's just my thoughts on the matter.
365146 I feel that I should point out that (at least for the context of this story) all dragons, while exceptionally long-lived, are still ultimately mortal.
So no Dragonrend.
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365163 Well, there is that solution.
This is pure epicness and a great prolog. Favorited, traked and thump up.
And Spike shall use telekinesis to shoot cabbage into buckets.
366343 Just because you brought that up, I'm now going to somehow work that into the story.
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Spike became the most powerful dragon by trying to shoot a cabbage off of a building and into the bucket
Good idea and Great writing so far! Please continue the adventure!
The bonsi tree got me off gard.
Hmm, changing the timeline to save lives... I'm sure that Dr. Whooves won't be very happy. anyway great story thus far, I eagerly await the next chapter, although I do wish it to be a bit longer next time. Keep goin and stay golden^^
this is going to be good!
Oh, damn! Sp- Err, Thorn arrived a few moments too late. I honestly thought he was the to one who shouted "FUS RO DAH"!
Yesh.... This excites me! Can't wait for this one to play out!
dude, awesome chapter and great job with how it's been playing out thus far. Furthermore, I love the fact the chapter was longer this time. Keep goin and stay golden^^
This.....this has the makings of a truly epic story.
Epicness level is over 100%
This cannot be! the epicness.......IS OVER 9000!!!!!!!!!
Words cannot express how awesome this story is
Tracked, fav'ed.
my...god...its beautiful. thank you sir. I have tears of manliness pouring down my cheeks.
First! Great chapter, eyes watered up when Twilight died. This story is awesome to say the least. I look forward to where you take this.
So spikes a badass
Awesome!
Dis Gunna Be Good
Spike is a badass god-like warrior?? Me Gusta
So I was somewhat right (only read the start) it was a nightmare.
Whew! Crazyness be happening in this chapter.
Oh gods... Twilight shouting... Well it's better than Pinkie Pie at least. Can't wait for the next chapter!
is she just knew how to be ethereal, then BOOM, spike's future is suddenly brighter. keep goin and stay golden^^
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MY TEARS
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Pinkie Pie doesn't NEED to Shout.
well... at least she didn't scream. Great job, keep goin and stay golden^^
P.S. First
Well that was interesting! Keep it going!
P.S. Second!
Quite interesting, yes, another superb chapter .
However, where will you be taking the relationship between Spike and Twilight, if you don't mind me asking? The way I interpreted Thorn's (Older Spike`s) feelings towards Twilight was way more than Mother-Son, while Twilight, in this chapter, seems to love Spike as a Son. Would you mind explaining, or is that all part of your glorious plan master?
So she's an alicorn now? Only she has dragon wings.
Seems legit.
I suspected Future Spike and Future Twilight were close like that. The kids got power but not much control. Can't wait to see how well he does. Also wondreing how the time travel has effected Thorn. Its obvious he's damaged somehow.
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Couldn't resist...
612633 God Dammit! >:l
Skyrim crossover, time travel, Alicorn Twilight, TwiSpike. This couldn't get any better.
I saw what you did there
alright, just a quick question. To get Alduin on the ground, you usually need dragonrend, so how will you incorporate it into the story? will there be an elder scroll involved or will you have Thorn/spike tell young spike. Keep goin and stay golden^^
That's true. Actually, you need Dragonrend to do any sort of damage to him at all.