Bio....dunno. MEOW http://www.facebook.com/Glitchthezodiac Friend meh. Talk to meh. I get bored.
This story is based off the song 'September' by the Living Tombstone, the song can be viewed here- http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OSZlAltkYoc
All of this is based solely on what I've heard and thought while listening to the song, and a little story to go and give the story some life. Basicly my take on it, may be mistakes, due to this being made at 3:24 AM. Lolwut
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Crazy fucker...
First off, I love how you've stayed consistent with the song. I've seen a lot of "September" fics that just slap an OC in the role of Tombstone and walk around with just the concept going on. You, however, have done the exact opposite of that. You've got a really clean, good writing style that really meshes well with this too. And for that, you get a thumb.
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Nice work.
469638>>469658 Ah, I made this short story early in the morning, ( I believe I said that ) when I meant to add extra chapters to my other story , but forgot where I was in it, and I got board while listening to this song. Glad you guys like it. Andy Jackk, I totally agree, while typing I was like, "Hot damn, this guy I messed up, WHY AM I MAKING HIM EVEN WORSE?!" I felt really sick writing this...
Edit: Humor me, my other story is much less dark, I'm not one for dark fics, but it was needed for this one.
Not bad, although it was a little bland. Try to use more synonyms.
685904 This was a quick one-shot I typed at 2 a.m when I was board. I don't think I want to fix this.
Nice. I really love that song and it's nice to see someone give a true shot at writing out the story taking place. I also like the little touches you added, it helped clarify what was going on behind the scenes. All in all; good work. That is all.
1120572 Thanks, sorry for the late response, but I have tons of stuff that I have to deal with.
Thanks though, like I said.
Feedback like that helps for me to improve my writing.
I think I'll hit this genre again, eventually.
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I think you should go for it. Mu only real issues with it after rereading it was that it kind of breaks the immersion when you refer to some lines with "I" when it's not diolouge. If you were to change that a bit and make it feel more like we're seeing this from an outside perspective; I feel it's be a bit better in depth. Still fantastic nonetheless.
hello, i have made a group for fanfics based off of livingtombstone's "September", and your fanfic has been added to this group
it is a relatively new group, thus little to no members as of yet.
well anyways, here is a link to the group:
September by Living Tombstone Based Fanfics
new members are welcome and encouraged to join.
Wait you wrote this awesome thing in one shot? Nice job!
Only issues I see are, as Fazed Audio said, the fact you use "I" outside of the speaking parts.
Oh, you see that thumbs up button? I'M GONNA PRESS IT!
Then Tombstone killed Celestia and Luna...
The original song had a dark ending, you just made it even darker, bravo.