Gonna try this whole writing thing again.
Left to clean up after the Equestria Games aerial relay qualifier, Rainbow Dash was feeling put out. To her surprise, she wasn't the only pony left behind. Hey, why not make the most of it, right?
Not much else to say about this one. Just a cute moment between Soarin and Rainbow Dash.
This is a special one shot I wrote for MyLittleXyo as part of my birthday short series. I hope I did your idea justice. Thanks for all the amazing comments over the months.
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5062972 Glad you liked it.
Great one shot, i'd say it leaves big potential for a full story, but its great for a one shot.
5067094 Glad you enjoyed it.
5068911 Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading!
So cute ^^
I'll confess I'm more of a Soarin'/Spitfire shipper, but this was pretty solid. Felt a tad short, and may have benefited with a bit more to it. But like I said, this is still a worthy effort. I liked it. Green thumb!
5089923 Yeah, I felt it needed to be longer myself. But for the life of me, I couldn't figure out how to make it longer. Not normally a problem for me, but Rainbow Dash shipping is not my normal thing. Ah well, c'est la vie. Thanks for reading and commenting!
Wait so why was RD punished? She didn't do anything wrong at the qualifiers and IK she didn't want to choose between ponyville and cloudsdale so why is she having to clean all it up?
My only issue is that Twilight forced RD to stay behind as punishment.
There was probably another reason she could have given.
Otherwise, this was a great story.