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For Pinkie Pie, there is no such thing as "too much" fun. Her friends can attest to that.
So of course she's happy when she meets some new friends. Not only that, but two of them even say they can cook! Which is good, because they need to pay off a debt within moments of entering the building.

What could possibly go wrong?


WARNING: Contains Undertale spoilers

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This is just too perfect. Well done!

A new world to SAVE!

The characterization was pretty spot-on. It was hilarious seeing Undyne and Papyrus being too much for Pinkie to handle.

Emtu #4 · Oct 7th, 2015 · · ·

Upon searching FimFiction for 'undertale', there was one result.

That one result fills you with DETERMINATION.

6500661 Yeah, I'm surprised it took this long for one to show up. Undertale really needs more exposure.

Amazing! I love Undertale and now this great story:heart:

I´m not sure how much I am going to like this one-shot, but finally a Undertale story, I really liked the main chars of that game. Are there already more storys about Undertale?

Maybe I only liked it, because I´m sort of hyped for that game right now, since I only played it yesterday the first time, and really like the characters, but it was a good one-shot, However I would like to read a bigger one, or some sort of a sequel.

Normally I don´t like One-shots, because they are way to short, but as long if they don´t take themself to seriously, then some of them are good too.

I fucking died. Great job man.

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It's a fantastic game, and it deserves every bit of praise that's been heaped upon it. It's even the top rated game of all time on Metacritic.

Edit: And one lower review brought it down to be tied for highest.

we need more undertale stories on this site

I am so happy I found this :rainbowlaugh: Undertale is so much fun.

Also, I listened to Spear of Justice during the cooking session :rainbowlaugh:

I especially loved the banter between Celestia and Toriel, since I consider the former to be a motherly figure.

6504075 Did you know what happens at the genocide ending? I nearly finished it, and used a spoiler, I didn´t liked the name I had to read there. Somehow I think he shouldn´t be in "that" game.
That was the only thing that was not so good about the game, everything else was nearly perfect.

Exactly the kind of train wreck I expected when I found this story. Well done, I'd give it more than a simple thumbs up and favorite if I could :eeyup:

Personally I thought that pinkie pie was being a bitch. Awesome story BTW :D

6504075 Mhm, that KillScreen reviewer that gave a 65 out of 100, just because he was too stupid to read the "You don´t have to kill anybody" and too narrow-minded to even realise that "load-and-save" isn´t just a feature, but a core/story element in this game. I mean, he didn´t even finish Undertale! He just blames the mistake (Killing Toriel accidentally) he made that could have been avoided (or, erased by loading the save file) entirely on the game. What a nob...

Anyway, I really liked the story, and I share Dirty Bit´s Opinion about Goat Mom and Horse Mom :3

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Apparently there is at least one reviewer that couldn't figure out the "broken floor" puzzle and decided he had to brute force it, rather than noticing the pattern of leaves on the floor where you fall. (That's what the first room with the unavoidable fall is supposed to demonstrate, that the leaves below correspond to broken floor above.)

Dammit now i want moar....i'm gonna cry for a while, thank you :ajsleepy:

imagine the Temmies on equestria

10/10 too good.

Gave me a chuckle.

We need more Undertale stories, just one is one hundred too few :pinkiesmile:

we need more of this

Faving because Undertale.

Toriel and Fluttershy not in the same room as one another/interacting in any way? I'm suspecting time travel. Someone must have seen the cutepocalypse and had to stop everybody's hearts from exploding. Must have been Gaster.

Well done! VERY WELL DONE! Not even Pinkie can handle that level of cooking!

6565309 Temmie? u ThWink u cEEn dA wAst Of mOi?!?! i g0 tOO col legg. i GwoTa deGwee. u dWie.
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Does anyone remember when this used to be the only Undertale/MLP fic on the site? Thumbs up if you think this is the best one still!

6657158 2 months, man.
It's been two months since Undertale came out.

Though this is one of the better crossover fics done with it.
The amusing and cheerful antics have filled me with DETERMINATION.

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And with all the stuff that's come out since then, it's felt like longer. :ajsmug:

6670867 We live in exciting and interesting times, my friend.
I'd not wish that fate on anyone, but there it is.

Excellent fluff.

I think I know how this accident happened in the 1st place...

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Also, I have nothing more to say than I loved it.

aww... I'm little sad that Asgore wasn't in the story :ajsleepy:

At last! An Undertale crossover fic that fully deserves an upvote and fave.

Whoever came up with the comedy in Undertale is a genius!

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That would be Toby Fox, who is also responsible for literally everything else in Undertale.

6774266 All by himself?

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Yep, he did every single thing in the game, with only a couple instances of help with art.

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This was amazing. I require further shenanigananry.

....Sequel fic. Pinkie Pie goes to Undertale..>TO GET SOMEONE TO FIX THE DARN BAKERY!

occasionally washing them down with some ketchup he kept in his jacket.

youbastardyouknowdamnwellthatwasntfreakingketchupyouheartlesssoullessmonster

Celestia let out a few more chuckles. "Y- Yes, Frisk, there is no reason to be embarrassed." Suddenly, she started to crack up again. "Okay, maybe a little reason."

Frisk will never be allowed to live it down. *snerk*

"Say, Twilight, quick question, do you prefer cinnamon or butterscotch?"

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