Octavia and Caramel have been happily married for fifteen years. Or have they?
A year after their marriage, Caramel started working all the time. It was a very rare thing for them to see each other, so as a result, Octavia became unhappy.
After four years of this, Octavia finally told Caramel how she felt, and he snapped.
Caramel became insanely clingy, Caramel would never leave Octavia alone, and when she tried to go out with her friends or tell him to stop, he would sob and emotionally abuse her. So as a result she gave up on love.
Years later, Octavia gets a new job where she meets, Lyra, Bon Bon, and her boss Vinyl Scratch. As she learns about these new friends and grow closer and closer to them, she starts to fall in love with Vinyl.
Will Vinyl feel the same?
If she does how will Octavia keep their relationship hidden?
Will Octavia finally get a divorce with Caramel?
And if Caramel ever learned that Octavia loved somepony else, how will he react?
Find out in Refound Love.
Contains: Cursing and some sexual references
Proof Reader/Editor/Cover maker: Divina
Proof Reader/Editor(For a portion of the story): Ashes
Plz don't kill me Caramel fans
Added this story to my read-later folder, and im going to read it for sure!
And i saw you also think Rainbow Dash is the best. So i would like to ask you to join my Rainbow Dash Group called #TeamDash (Click here)
7199035 Thanks :D
7199042 Alright
7199042 Does this mean that she'll play a role in this story?
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Are you asking if Rainbow Dash will play a role in Refound Love?
Because if you are, then I am sorry to say she will not.
Although I do love Rainbow Dash, she does not really have a place for this story
Finally a story with a original premise of this couple .
I'm liking it n_n
7258690 Thanks!
It makes me so glad to know that someone is enjoying this story
So far so good
7265224 Thanks!
In my opinion the story is good, it focuses on the important but without skipping many details.
When much could work a little harder in the dialogues , especially where a character is trying to hide something , or it is difficult to talk about a topic.
About Lyra and Bon Bon , okay provided that the necessary time to focus on the main partner.
I'm enjoying a lot this story, I want to see as follows
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Thank you for your feedback and for enjoying the story
Sadly dialogue has been a bit hard for me, so I will try to improve upon it.
As for Lyra and Bon Bon, don't worry they will not be in the story too much as a couple and more as just supporting characters in the future
Whens The Next Chapter??
7295124 This Monday!
I hope enjoying the story
7295237 I Am loving This story Its Awesome Cant Wait Till Monday
7295277 Thanks!
Cant wait till next chapter
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Great story cant wait for the next one!!!
7326541 Thanks!
I am glad you are enjoying it so far
Im so hype for this story!
7327227 Awesome!
I can't wait a whole week
7345525 Lol, that is like me with every OctaScratch story I read
I am glad you are enjoying the story so far!
7345621 don't make me wait a whole week
7345626 Sorry
I need time to make sure the chapters are as good as they can be
7345713( NOOOOOOO >
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7345756 if I stop complaining will u follow me
Im REALLY Hating how i have to wait a whole week but Quality is better then Quantity
7348247 Agreed
Yay, they're cuddling!
>Chapter ends
There has never existed a fan-fiction that has instilled inside of me this much absolute rage directed towards Caramel.
<NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO) WHY DO U HATE ME SO MUCH THAT U PUT A CLIFF HANGER
7362787 Nah I just love annoying people
7362632 You sound like my proofreader
Glad you are enjoying the story!
Awwww it got cut short well for my liking well good chapter btw
7369028 What do you mean by got cut short?
Glad you enjoyed this chapter
7369073 By cut short im used to reading 3-5k word chapters so yea a little short for me
but im loving this story
7369645 Ohhhh ok
I try to make them as long as I can
Glad you love the story!
7362890 Yes... I. Hate. Caramel
With a burning passion... More than words can even explain...
Ps. I am the editor XD
Uh oh this isn't going to end well
7383468 Nope
7383468 Not at all, sweetie, not at all...
7383499 if u put it like this Human obsession + romance novel obsession= chaos for those who they are trying to help
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Hehehe...
That mall is stupid!
Also, the amount of awkwardness in this chapter is uncanny.
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Did you enjoy the chapter?
7383932 I did indeed enjoy the chapter.
There were a couple of spelling mistakes and instances of repetitive language, but that didn't stop me.7383986
Glad you enjoyed it
I have been working on not repeating words as much, which you may by able to tell by going back to earlier chapters.
As for the spelling mistakes, well then that just means I need to re read it more
Thanks for the constructive criticism
7385880 Anytime.